Autumn Rain

Autumn rain smells
coming from fallen leaves
on the ground.

Autumn rain something
in the air, that
makes you different.

Autumn rain setting
the stage for
snow to put on a show.

Autumn rain so
refreshing the
sounds you make.

wrote 11-11-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Parish Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Even though I like all seasons, Autumn is my favorite. I love this write.
Winter Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 10:59 AM
I can smell the rain simply from reading your poem. You captured a wet autumn day that has the feel of the approaching winter. Love, Shar
Torres Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 4:00 AM
James a beautiful depiction of Autumn rain and leaves. lYou took me there in smell and imagery. Excellent piece missed your poetry Micahel Torres
Lakhera Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 4:50 PM
Wow Lovely visuals. But autumn rains are so cold:) Lets hope the stage is set on time for us. Take care, Chitra
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