Autumn Rain

concentric circles span out from puddle — 
                          red and yellow leaves submerged


9/24/2019
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Ravidas Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 10:35 AM
Right in a here, behind the window. Nice monoku.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 2:43 PM
Thanks so much, dear friend!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 11:48 PM
Lovely... Bless you
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Thanks and blessings your way! :) K8m
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:30 AM
Kim you amaze me at every turn. This poem has captured my dendrites and made them smile. I see it!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 5:26 PM
I smile seeing you smile, my friend! :):)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 5:22 PM
A pretty image.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, Richard!
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 3:45 PM
A precise, powerful portrayal of a vivid scene. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:46 PM
Thank you! I love trying to find just the right words!
Green Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Beautiful Kim. A lovely fall scene.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Thank you, Chris! :)
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