Autumn Rain

concentric circles span out from puddle — red and yellow leaves submerged 9/24/2019

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Date: 10/7/2019 10:35:00 AM

Right in a here, behind the window. Nice monoku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thanks so much, dear friend!

Date: 9/30/2019 11:48:00 PM

Lovely... Bless you

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 5:26:00 PM

Thanks and blessings your way! :) K8m

Date: 9/27/2019 1:30:00 AM

Kim you amaze me at every turn. This poem has captured my dendrites and made them smile. I see it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 5:26:00 PM

I smile seeing you smile, my friend! :):)

Date: 9/25/2019 5:22:00 PM

A pretty image.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 5:26:00 PM

Thanks, Richard!

Date: 9/24/2019 3:45:00 PM

A precise, powerful portrayal of a vivid scene. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2019 8:46:00 PM

Thank you! I love trying to find just the right words!

Date: 9/24/2019 1:31:00 PM

Beautiful Kim. A lovely fall scene.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2019 1:56:00 PM

Thank you, Chris! :)