Autumn Phantasma


leaves shaking from rain
makes me feel as if I've heard
whispers down the lane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 5:05 PM
ew la la - I don't know why, but this gave me chills!
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 1:08 PM
Ohh I really like this, Paige
Oldham Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 5:53 PM
I hear them in the woods -
Nicole Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 7:16 PM
A little mysterious, indeed. The rain likes to create all kinds of moods. Many wonderful blessings to you, Paige. Hugs, Brandy
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 5:37 PM
glad to see you here today....a delightful Haiku, hugs, Sara
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 4:57 PM
Very nice :-)
Ashley Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 8:48 AM
Dear Paige, I love the atmospheric vibes and pensive musing of this poem. Stunning! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Poet Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Paige, your haiku is lovely. Even if it's raining and lonely, I'm glad you're back on track.
Villalon Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 5:44 PM
It's the wind that blows and solitude knows... Your poem ignites what your heart recites! ... Cliff :)
Daniels Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 5:03 PM
Beautiful haiku, Hun. Happy you are back on track, albeit rainy loneliness. Sending light & Love.xx
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