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Autumn Oak

A bouquet of fire beside a lake
Reflecting whorls in red opaque

19 Nov 2014

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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November 16, 2016 at 9:01 AM

A unique visual! Congrats, David!

November 15, 2016 at 5:40 PM

so lovely to read this gem again David!:-) hugs jan xx

November 15, 2016 at 12:29 PM

David, this one had me sitting in my kayak, drifting slowly through its beauty...

November 15, 2016 at 9:09 AM

A beautiful painting with so few words, David. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra

November 15, 2016 at 7:58 AM

The imagery is captivating, David. Very beautiful. Congratulations...indeed a worthy win! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2016 at 8:43 PM

wow, this is absolutely gorgeous, David. That first line!!! And then the rhyme at the end. FAVE

Carrie Richards

November 14, 2016 at 8:27 PM

I love this colorful poem of Autumn !! Congratulations, David!!

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 24, 2014 at 2:30 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations David.

November 24, 2014 at 9:54 AM

I see your name is on the winner's list..It was awesome to see it there..Creative work needs a congrats..Sara

November 24, 2014 at 9:52 AM

This is another elegant entry. Congrats on this fine write.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 24, 2014 at 8:54 AM

Wow, I love your crystalline, David...congrats!! :))

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2014 at 10:30 PM

Good grief, I'd have put this near the top!!! congrats on the HM, david.

November 23, 2014 at 11:57 AM

It's simply stunning reading this a second time round - congrats Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

November 21, 2014 at 9:10 PM

OMG, this is brilliant. FAVE

November 21, 2014 at 3:47 PM

interesting approach to the theme.. how creative and well done, mohan.. I like!.. huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 20, 2014 at 8:06 AM

Beautiful David. Wonderful picture you describe.

November 20, 2014 at 3:12 AM

wonderful imagery - good luck David:-) hugs jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

November 19, 2014 at 9:55 PM

Beautifully captivating! Best wishes. Pandita

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