Autumn Nearing

Green oak leaves glisten against brilliant blue skies sunlight silver sheen

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Matthew Anish

Date: 9/22/2010 6:24:00 AM

Fine alliteration here! The last line is beautiful! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

James Fraser

Date: 9/13/2010 12:43:00 PM

Your words tell me that the greenery is making a last show of beauty before the calling. Wonderful Haiku Audrey >> James

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/12/2010 9:14:00 AM

Love the imagery Audrey, love Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/11/2010 6:19:00 PM

well expressed thoughts with fine images, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/11/2010 1:40:00 PM

Visual and inhaling the loveliness of eavery word my BBF... an amazing piece to the Fall Season.. enjoyed your Haiku luv...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 11:23:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Audrey! LUv,Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/10/2010 5:08:00 PM

enjoyed reading today...this lazy evening.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2010 4:58:00 PM

What a beautiful afternoon to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Audrey. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2010 3:58:00 PM

nice one, enjoyed your write, wish you the best of your day ahead..P.D.