Autumn Nearing

Green oak leaves glisten
 against brilliant blue skies
 sunlight silver sheen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Anish Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Fine alliteration here! The last line is beautiful! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Your words tell me that the greenery is making a last show of beauty before the calling. Wonderful Haiku Audrey >> James
Neels Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Love the imagery Audrey, love Wilma
Mehta Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 6:19 PM
well expressed thoughts with fine images, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Visual and inhaling the loveliness of eavery word my BBF... an amazing piece to the Fall Season.. enjoyed your Haiku luv...
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 11:23 PM
Beautiful imagery, Audrey! LUv,Andrea
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September 10, 2010 at 5:08 PM
enjoyed reading today...this lazy evening.
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:58 PM
What a beautiful afternoon to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Audrey. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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September 10, 2010 at 3:58 PM
nice one, enjoyed your write, wish you the best of your day ahead..P.D.
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