Autumn Midnight Lips

amber night moon
        latticed leaves, heavenly roof
        sparkling,kissing night


             10/18/2020
              Opus # 1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Castellenas Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Amazing use of words. A perfect poem. Thank you for sharing.
Romios Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:16 AM
Hi John, thanks for commenting on the imagery. I agree with you. It is quite perfect. Imagists here hold their nose? I am so used to that.)) That's Ok. You and I like it. Bless you,
Cunningham Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 6:13 AM
We're well into autumn now, winter won't be far behind. Tom
Romios Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:12 AM
All parts of the world are so different.,here its been in the 90's. Autumn here is next month.few leaves on the ground. Fine with me. Enjoy winter... Won't be here till December. As they sat, "I dig that" It's so great here.
Romios Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 9:14 AM
Good show! Not here, in the 90's. We have two months to winter. As I told Regina, gets cold but most trees remain green. Heard your gov wants lockdowns and people are protesting lol Hugs Pangie xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 11:04 AM
Hello Panagiota, it is autumn here in Canada. The leaves are changing colors. 23 bags of leaves raked so far. Do you have fall in Calif.? Do you have winter? Hugs Darlene xxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes 23 bags of leaves, there is more to come because not all the leaves have fallen. Sometimes winter is in October, or November or December. Depends on Mother's nature mood. Your winter's are better than ours. hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo
Romios Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 12:38 PM
Bi Darlene.autumn cones next month. But we never lose all leaves. Si it's not barren looking. Winter is in December. No snow, no ice , no sleet. Very mellow compared to Canada. 23 bags? Holy cow. Will answer your Soupmail later. Love, Pangie xxxooo
Mcintosh Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 4:40 AM
I love fall so... God bless you sweet lady
Romios Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Reginna! I remember you liking fall. No fall here for another month. The trees never get bare here. Many do fal but never saw a bare tree, yet. Winter is cold but green? I like it. No snow or sleet Hugs,Pangie xx
Romios Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 4:46 AM
Oh, so glad you like it! It's not that apparent in California. Regina... Leaves still verdant green and flowers still growing. I recall my colorful past in the Midwest and all the leaves I loved and endlessly raked.-)) To God Be the Glory! Panagiota xx
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace