Autumn Midnight Lips

amber night moon latticed leaves, heavenly roof sparkling,kissing night 10/18/2020 Opus # 1

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John Castellenas

Date: 10/24/2020 6:59:00 AM

Amazing use of words. A perfect poem. Thank you for sharing.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/24/2020 7:16:00 AM

Hi John, thanks for commenting on the imagery. I agree with you. It is quite perfect. Imagists here hold their nose? I am so used to that.)) That's Ok. You and I like it. Bless you,

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/19/2020 6:13:00 AM

We're well into autumn now, winter won't be far behind. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/24/2020 7:12:00 AM

All parts of the world are so different.,here its been in the 90's. Autumn here is next month.few leaves on the ground. Fine with me. Enjoy winter... Won't be here till December. As they sat, "I dig that" It's so great here.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/19/2020 9:14:00 AM

Good show! Not here, in the 90's. We have two months to winter. As I told Regina, gets cold but most trees remain green. Heard your gov wants lockdowns and people are protesting lol Hugs Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/18/2020 11:04:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, it is autumn here in Canada. The leaves are changing colors. 23 bags of leaves raked so far. Do you have fall in Calif.? Do you have winter? Hugs Darlene xxx-oooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/19/2020 10:28:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, yes 23 bags of leaves, there is more to come because not all the leaves have fallen. Sometimes winter is in October, or November or December. Depends on Mother's nature mood. Your winter's are better than ours. hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/18/2020 12:38:00 PM

Bi Darlene.autumn cones next month. But we never lose all leaves. Si it's not barren looking. Winter is in December. No snow, no ice , no sleet. Very mellow compared to Canada. 23 bags? Holy cow. Will answer your Soupmail later. Love, Pangie xxxooo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/18/2020 4:40:00 AM

I love fall so... God bless you sweet lady

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/19/2020 9:10:00 AM

Reginna! I remember you liking fall. No fall here for another month. The trees never get bare here. Many do fal but never saw a bare tree, yet. Winter is cold but green? I like it. No snow or sleet Hugs,Pangie xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/18/2020 4:46:00 AM

Oh, so glad you like it! It's not that apparent in California. Regina... Leaves still verdant green and flowers still growing. I recall my colorful past in the Midwest and all the leaves I loved and endlessly raked.-)) To God Be the Glory! Panagiota xx