Krish Radhakrishna Poet Verse

Autumn- Merse

frost
like a 
silver queen
makes yellow sheen
on bed of leaves with 
ruby emerald gloss!
wisp of wind sails across
shuffling the patterns
as crimson rays
heave a sigh
and move
on!

123456 
654321 syllables
1st placement
Merse 2 poetry contest
Malabika Choudhury sponsored
written 20/09/21

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Susan Ashley October 26, 2021 at 8:58 PM Dear Krish, your use of brilliant colors is exquisite. “Frost like a silver queen” - such a fantastic image to start a poem filled with beautiful imagery. Your creative pen is lovely and lively capturing the spirit of Fall with finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Krish Radhakrishna October 26, 2021 at 11:24 PM Susan thanks! delighted to have your views and you are always kind!:)

Eve Roper September 26, 2021 at 11:01 AM Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Krish. Love the lines, frost like a silver queen and the wind, heave a sigh and move on. congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve Krish Radhakrishna September 26, 2021 at 3:46 PM Thanks Eve for your kind words of appreciation! Kindest regards Krish

Rama Balasubramanian September 26, 2021 at 7:49 AM Congratulations. I knew this would fetch a too win. Was really well done. Keep it up! Krish Radhakrishna September 26, 2021 at 9:45 AM Thanks Rama!:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 26, 2021 at 6:11 AM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna September 26, 2021 at 6:13 AM Thanks Mala! Thanks for this brand new version! looks very popular!!

Sam Kauffman September 25, 2021 at 11:03 AM So many beautiful and very inventive images dance through your poem Krish - "sails," "shuffling," "heaves." The movement in your merse is in itself a picture of fall. Congratulations! Krish Radhakrishna September 25, 2021 at 11:38 AM Thanks Sam! your analytical comments, I love! Thanks once again!:)

Rama Balasubramanian September 24, 2021 at 10:11 AM Great imagery. Loved the way you described fall. Unique. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. Krish Radhakrishna September 24, 2021 at 11:24 AM Thanks Rama!! yes, indeed!

Darlene De Beaulieu September 21, 2021 at 12:18 PM Hello Krish, I love the way you have described Autumn. Blessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu September 21, 2021 at 3:15 PM Hello Krish, your welcome my friend. Thank you for the warm wishes. Enjoy your evening my friend. I hope allis well withyou. Krish Radhakrishna September 21, 2021 at 1:02 PM Thanks Darlene! My warm wishes to you!

Regina Mcintosh September 20, 2021 at 2:23 PM Wonderful. I so love Fall. God bless you always, Love, Gina Krish Radhakrishna September 21, 2021 at 1:02 PM Thanks Gina! delighted you like it!