Autumn Legacy

limbs raped of time worn dreams
crepe leaves fleck flowing streams

Copyright, October 11, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Very descriptive work..A little strong textured..Sara
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 2:53 PM
Great rhyme Faye I think Nette has given us the hardest challenge yet with this form:-) good luck in the contest. hugs jan xx
Gibson Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 3:02 PM
I agree, Jan. 12 syllables to get an entire thought is tight.
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