Autumn Leaves

 Autumn Leaves
                                             Golden Lovers    


I can see you; try not to hide.
	How beautiful you dance side to side.

I can see you in my dreams at night 
	Wondering, should I trust my sight?

How can I kiss you my little leaf?
	From the beginning wondering if;

One slight storm or one little wind
	Bring us together until the end.

Which one is better, which one is worst?
	Drowning in water or dying of thirst.

Spring is gone, summer is past
	Autumn is falling faster and fast.

Hope to touch you when we fall
	Golden Lovers love the Fall.

Step gently when you walk,
	Speak softly when you talk.

Thousands of Lovers if they could,
	Making the autumn understood!



Haloo                  1/8/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 12:37 PM
Wonderful poem! Very creative! I love autumn, and the falling of leaves remind me of transient life. Thanks for your visit to my page.
Callus Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 4:41 AM
Glad I went delving in your earlier posts, Pashang. This is lovely and you creatively entwine nature with love. Regards // paul
Salehi Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 2:58 AM
Thanks Paul... I'm glad you like it.
Allison Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 11:16 AM
I'd love to see one of your paintings accompany this beautiful autumnal romantic gem:-) Such lovely imagery Pashang:-) hugs jan x
Salehi Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 11:32 AM
You are so nice Jan....
Delaney Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 3:33 PM
How beautiful to read hearts in tune with nature and leaves. Hope you are feeling better. This made my heart happy. SuZ
Salehi Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Thank you Suzanne...I am so glad that this work of mine made you happy... LHH ... Love, health, happiness for you... Pashang
Raven Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Well Pashang your piece does sing so gently. I do Love the concept of the poem and i always Love the Love. Your heart sings so gently into the piece. A definite seven for the golden leaves, may they ever dance on Love's breeze....Vladislav.
Salehi Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:44 PM
Thank you my friend for being so kind. I love to Love as well.
Salehi Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 6:01 PM
Such a beautiful name Pandita! Thank you for all kind words.Thousands of Lovers if they could, making the autumn understood!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Thank you so much, Pashang, for the kind compliments about my name - happy you like it! Pandita"
Sietesantos Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Such beautiful autumn leaves dancing throughout this lovely piece! I love the amazing imagery, my friend! Have a wonderful day and a 7! Pandita
Salehi Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Such a beautiful name Pandita! Thank you for all kind words.Thousands of Lovers if they could, making the autumn understood!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 5:06 AM
What a beauty Pashang! Congrats on awesome win!
Salehi Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 10:18 AM
You're so kind Doctor... No more fear of becoming. winning or losing both welcoming.
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 5:09 PM
Pashing , though this is not haiku, I think it is a lovely poem. Congrats on your win.
A  Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Pashang, Congratulations on your awesome Autumn win. **SKAT**
Salehi Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Thanks SKAT, it seems that you're the only person that is reading my work. Please tell me, is sugar sweeter or He who makes sugar?
Donnelly Ellis Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Maybe Pashang . Thank you. LOL
Donnelly Ellis Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Delightful !
Salehi Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Thank you Joan..... I read your IF, I said it once that ..... if you plant the IF, the MAYBE will grow! Good luck with all your IFs.
Christian Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 3:20 PM
very nice
Salehi Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:37 PM
Thanks
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