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Autumn Leaves

Autumn Leaves

yellow butterflies
pressed against the window pane…
hello, autumn leaves

autumnhaiku

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Line Gauthier

February 10, 2018 at 9:24 AM

I love the seemingly childlike reaction in the last line. Refreshingly touching. Superbly done, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos

February 10, 2018 at 10:27 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed this whimsical piece and I appreciate your kind compliments, Line! Kindest regards. Pandita

David Meade

October 21, 2014 at 3:50 PM

I like the Haikus -- the simple concise structure that captures a thought, moment, feeling . . . nicely done, light, airy and colorful! It makes me want to go out a rank a pile of leaves and jump into them!

Pandita Sietesantos

October 21, 2014 at 7:58 PM

David, thank you so very much! I am glad you enjoyed this piece and I appreciate your kind compliments which inspire me even more! Warmest regards! Pandita

Maritza Pagan

October 21, 2014 at 12:57 PM

Beautiful... I can picture it in my mind. Thank you

Pandita Sietesantos

October 21, 2014 at 7:59 PM

Hi Maritza, I am so appreciative of your kind compliments! Thank you my friend! Warmest regards! Pandita

John Matthews

October 20, 2014 at 1:03 PM

Thanks for your comments on Waters. This is a really fine piece you wrote

Pandita Sietesantos

October 20, 2014 at 2:13 PM

Hi John, thank you so very much for your very gracious compliments which I appreciate! Kindest regards. Pandita

James Horn

October 11, 2014 at 8:04 PM

It tells it all on the money. The yellow butterflies are all over the place here in Bolivia, NC just south of Wilmington. Where is your neck of the woods at? Jim Horn

Pandita Sietesantos

October 11, 2014 at 9:52 PM

Hi Jim, well you certainly know what I am talking about! Here in Georgia that's the way it is especially now in early Autumn! Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend! Pandita

Verlena S. Walker

October 8, 2014 at 9:48 AM

Short and sweet Pandita. I love the butterflies... Verlena

Pandita Sietesantos

October 8, 2014 at 11:21 AM

Hi Verlena, I couldn't resist including the comparison to lovely butterflies! Thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Have a great day Pandita

Jim Tidd

October 7, 2014 at 1:08 PM

Nice

Pandita Sietesantos

October 7, 2014 at 4:28 PM

Many thanks again, Jim. Glad you like this one! Pandita

Paul Callus

October 1, 2014 at 5:01 PM

Lovely and captivating autumn leaves haiku, Pandita. Love the imagery. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

October 4, 2014 at 10:43 PM

Hi Paul, thank you so very much for your always gracious compliments that always encourage me to continue writing! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Harry Horsman

September 30, 2014 at 11:36 AM

This is really clever Pandita, the imagery is beautiful...

Pandita Sietesantos

September 30, 2014 at 12:49 PM

Hi Harry, I am so appreciative of your kind compliments! Thank you my friend; I am glad you enjoyed this piece! Have a wonderful day! Pandita

David Brown

September 26, 2014 at 5:48 PM

Very sweet and gentle work, like the leaves it portrays. Well done, Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos

September 27, 2014 at 2:24 PM

Hi David, thank you so much for visiting and for your wonderful comments! Have a great weekend, my friend! Pandita

Gry Christensen

September 26, 2014 at 3:17 PM

A very clever metaphor. Such a wonderfully written haiku!

Pandita Sietesantos

September 27, 2014 at 2:23 PM

Gry, many thanks for your gracious compliments which I appreciate! Warm regards. Pandita

Liam Mcdaid

September 26, 2014 at 2:28 PM

such the gentle reminder of winter to come beautifully penned piece leaves a beautiful vision

Pandita Sietesantos

September 27, 2014 at 2:23 PM

Hi Liam, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Kika Ayala

September 26, 2014 at 1:14 PM

Beautiful imagery - well done, Pandita! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos

September 26, 2014 at 1:17 PM

Hi Kika, thank you so very much, my friend, for your gracious compliments! Pandita

Simona Dancila

September 26, 2014 at 11:39 AM

a lyric spark in a cloudy day, beautiful feeling!

Pandita Sietesantos

September 26, 2014 at 12:52 PM

Simona, thank you so much for visiting and for your wonderful comments! Have a great weekend, my friend! Pandita

Gary Bateman

September 26, 2014 at 10:57 AM

An enchanting write here Pandita!! If this Haiku is for a contest -- Best of Luck. Enjoyed this very much with the "yellow butterflies." Best Wishes, Gary

Pandita Sietesantos

September 26, 2014 at 11:04 AM

Gary, I am so appreciative of your kind compliments! Thank you my friend; I am glad you enjoyed this piece! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

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