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Autumn Leaves

Autumn Leaves
yellow butterflies pressed against the window pane… hello, autumn leaves

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Date: 2/10/2018 9:24:00 AM
I love the seemingly childlike reaction in the last line. Refreshingly touching. Superbly done, Pandita.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 2/10/2018 10:27:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed this whimsical piece and I appreciate your kind compliments, Line! Kindest regards. Pandita
Date: 10/27/2014 12:25:00 AM
I love your take on the Autumn Leaves and how it opens up the imagination to the colors of the fall leaves with butterflies that gather together during this special season.
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Date: 10/27/2014 3:51:00 PM
Cinda, thank you so very much for your very complimentary response and for your supportive comments, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 10/21/2014 3:50:00 PM
I like the Haikus -- the simple concise structure that captures a thought, moment, feeling . . . nicely done, light, airy and colorful! It makes me want to go out a rank a pile of leaves and jump into them!
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Date: 10/21/2014 7:58:00 PM
David, thank you so very much! I am glad you enjoyed this piece and I appreciate your kind compliments which inspire me even more! Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 10/21/2014 12:57:00 PM
Beautiful... I can picture it in my mind. Thank you
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Date: 10/21/2014 7:59:00 PM
Hi Maritza, I am so appreciative of your kind compliments! Thank you my friend! Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 10/20/2014 1:03:00 PM
Thanks for your comments on Waters. This is a really fine piece you wrote
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Date: 10/20/2014 2:13:00 PM
Hi John, thank you so very much for your very gracious compliments which I appreciate! Kindest regards. Pandita
Date: 10/11/2014 8:04:00 PM
It tells it all on the money. The yellow butterflies are all over the place here in Bolivia, NC just south of Wilmington. Where is your neck of the woods at? Jim Horn
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Date: 10/11/2014 9:52:00 PM
Hi Jim, well you certainly know what I am talking about! Here in Georgia that's the way it is especially now in early Autumn! Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend! Pandita
Date: 10/8/2014 9:48:00 AM
Short and sweet Pandita. I love the butterflies... Verlena
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Date: 10/8/2014 11:21:00 AM
Hi Verlena, I couldn't resist including the comparison to lovely butterflies! Thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Have a great day Pandita
Date: 10/7/2014 1:08:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:28:00 PM
Many thanks again, Jim. Glad you like this one! Pandita
Date: 10/1/2014 5:01:00 PM
Lovely and captivating autumn leaves haiku, Pandita. Love the imagery. // paul
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Date: 10/4/2014 10:43:00 PM
Hi Paul, thank you so very much for your always gracious compliments that always encourage me to continue writing! Have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 9/30/2014 11:36:00 AM
This is really clever Pandita, the imagery is beautiful...
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:49:00 PM
Hi Harry, I am so appreciative of your kind compliments! Thank you my friend; I am glad you enjoyed this piece! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Date: 9/26/2014 5:48:00 PM
Very sweet and gentle work, like the leaves it portrays. Well done, Pandita
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:24:00 PM
Hi David, thank you so much for visiting and for your wonderful comments! Have a great weekend, my friend! Pandita
Date: 9/26/2014 3:17:00 PM
A very clever metaphor. Such a wonderfully written haiku!
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:23:00 PM
Gry, many thanks for your gracious compliments which I appreciate! Warm regards. Pandita
Date: 9/26/2014 2:28:00 PM
such the gentle reminder of winter to come beautifully penned piece leaves a beautiful vision
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:23:00 PM
Hi Liam, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 9/26/2014 1:14:00 PM
Beautiful imagery - well done, Pandita! Kika
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Date: 9/26/2014 1:17:00 PM
Hi Kika, thank you so very much, my friend, for your gracious compliments! Pandita
Date: 9/26/2014 11:39:00 AM
a lyric spark in a cloudy day, beautiful feeling!
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Date: 9/26/2014 12:52:00 PM
Simona, thank you so much for visiting and for your wonderful comments! Have a great weekend, my friend! Pandita
Date: 9/26/2014 10:57:00 AM
An enchanting write here Pandita!! If this Haiku is for a contest -- Best of Luck. Enjoyed this very much with the "yellow butterflies." Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 9/26/2014 11:04:00 AM
Gary, I am so appreciative of your kind compliments! Thank you my friend; I am glad you enjoyed this piece! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita