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" AUTUMN'S GLORY "

Agonizing golden leaves are trembling as Autumn's bitter wind blows Fearing to fall onto their deathbed beneath the tree and decompose! © Demetrios Trifiatis 28 September 2021

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Al Juman

Date: 11/3/2021 7:18:00 PM

Beautiful , beautiful my friend every thing mends back. Long time---- Hope you are doing fine

Michael Tor

Date: 10/23/2021 4:49:00 AM

The life of a leaf. Is like our lives when we get closer to death there is a fear as you eloquently write a tremble...

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/3/2021 4:10:00 AM

Love this. So love fall. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/29/2021 9:58:00 AM

Stunning imagery and emotive phrases shine in your excellent couplet, Demetrius! I hope you enter it in Milt’s contest…a fave! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation and your fave, dearest Laura! I am too old to enter contests! Hugs

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 9/28/2021 11:28:00 PM

Beautiful picture of Autumn in all her splendour. All the seasons have a beauty of their own and they return annually for us all to delight in. Thank you, Demitrios for the images you paint in the lovely poetry you write.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, my friend, Shirley! Blessings.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/28/2021 11:11:00 PM

Great truth told in two lines, Demetrios:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2021 11:07:00 AM

Thank you so much, dearest little sister, Jo! Hugs xxx

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/28/2021 6:55:00 AM

You did a fantastic job of catching the Autumn scene. My friend Demetrios, you brilliantly embody the spirit of autumn's falling leaves in only two sentences.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2021 3:54:00 PM

Thank you for your gracious comment, my friend, Lasaad!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/28/2021 6:12:00 AM

In just two lines you captured the essence of autumn's falling leaves beautifully my friend. So well done.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2021 3:53:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit, my friend, Vijay!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/28/2021 4:52:00 AM

You captured the scene well in your couplet Demetrios, I love what autumn brings, all the beautiful colours, sadly as you say they don't last. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2021 3:52:00 PM

Wonderful comment. Thank you, dearest, Tom!