Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Couplet

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" AUTUMN'S GLORY "

Autumn Leaves

Agonizing golden leaves are trembling as Autumn's bitter wind blows

Fearing to fall onto their deathbed beneath the tree and decompose!  








© Demetrios Trifiatis
    28 September 2021

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Al Juman November 3, 2021 at 7:18 PM Beautiful , beautiful my friend every thing mends back. Long time---- Hope you are doing fine

Michael Tor October 23, 2021 at 4:49 AM The life of a leaf. Is like our lives when we get closer to death there is a fear as you eloquently write a tremble...

Regina Mcintosh October 3, 2021 at 4:10 AM Love this. So love fall. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Laura Leiser September 29, 2021 at 9:58 AM Stunning imagery and emotive phrases shine in your excellent couplet, Demetrius! I hope you enter it in Milt’s contest…a fave! :) Demetrios Trifiatis September 29, 2021 at 11:09 AM Thank you for your appreciation and your fave, dearest Laura! I am too old to enter contests! Hugs

Shirley Hawkins September 28, 2021 at 11:28 PM Beautiful picture of Autumn in all her splendour. All the seasons have a beauty of their own and they return annually for us all to delight in. Thank you, Demitrios for the images you paint in the lovely poetry you write. Demetrios Trifiatis September 29, 2021 at 11:08 AM Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, my friend, Shirley! Blessings.

Joanna Daniel September 28, 2021 at 11:11 PM Great truth told in two lines, Demetrios:) Demetrios Trifiatis September 29, 2021 at 11:07 AM Thank you so much, dearest little sister, Jo! Hugs xxx

Sotto Poet September 28, 2021 at 6:55 AM You did a fantastic job of catching the Autumn scene. My friend Demetrios,  you brilliantly embody the spirit of autumn's falling leaves in only two sentences. Demetrios Trifiatis September 28, 2021 at 3:54 PM Thank you for your gracious comment, my friend, Lasaad!

Vijay Pandit September 28, 2021 at 6:12 AM In just two lines you captured the essence of autumn's falling leaves beautifully my friend. So well done. Demetrios Trifiatis September 28, 2021 at 3:53 PM Much appreciate your visit, my friend, Vijay!

Tom Cunningham September 28, 2021 at 4:52 AM You captured the scene well in your couplet Demetrios, I love what autumn brings, all the beautiful colours, sadly as you say they don't last. Hope your week is going well. Tom Demetrios Trifiatis September 28, 2021 at 3:52 PM Wonderful comment. Thank you, dearest, Tom!