Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Rhyme

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Autumn Is Raining Color

A huge tree of varicolored leaves is raining beauty,
In the days of thrills, just past a sunshine spree,
On the steady march of glory, lasting all the year,
Until the lovely snows of winter takes up its rear!
Colorful leaves fly all day and throughout the dark,
And swirl gaily and engulf me with beauty's remark.
I listen as a birdsong is floating from the treetop,
He totally unaware someone has stopped to eavesdrop.
I am certain all the world would love my pretty tree,
That rains all the luscious colors of autumn over me!

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Susan Ashley March 7, 2021 at 6:35 PM Dear Evelyn, I love your pretty tree, with leaves raining autumn beauty, and I love eavesdropping on the birdsong too.. Your delightful imagery takes me to into these magic moments with you.. and Canned Heat takes me back to the magic moments of my youth :)) It's such a pleasure to celebrate Nature with you! An enthralling piece. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Evelyn Judy Buehler March 7, 2021 at 6:43 PM Susan, I am so glad you took the time to enjoy my pretty tree with me. Thank you for your warm appreciation and many kind remarks. Blessings and good wishes, Evelyn

Alexis Y. March 7, 2021 at 4:25 PM WoW! Evelyn, Your use of colors in your poems can be compared to a painter; you don't just throw color around in your writes; you intentionally place them. I just read the before this one; Are you a painter? Good content and imagery. Have a great day:-) Alexis Evelyn Judy Buehler March 7, 2021 at 6:50 PM Thank you Alexis. Your words are pure delight. I am not a painter, but I absolutely adore colors, so I use them to enhance the imagery of my poems constantly. I'm so happy you enjoyed this verse. Blessings, Evelyn

Victor Buhagiar March 7, 2021 at 1:17 AM Wonderful imagery. True sometimes we see special scenes. Evelyn Judy Buehler March 7, 2021 at 9:14 AM Thank you for the delightful remarks. :)

Gershon Wolf March 6, 2021 at 6:46 PM Such a fresh idea -- 'raining leaves!' Truly your sharp eye and open heart have created a wonderful image here, Evelyn. FAVE! Thanks, Gershon Evelyn Judy Buehler March 6, 2021 at 9:14 PM Some moments in nature are truly special, and need to be celebrated. Thank you for your very kind words, Gershon.

Beryl Edmonds March 6, 2021 at 6:22 PM I know I would love your pretty tree Evelyn, I love all trees can’t even imagine a world without them. Lovely poem ~ Belle Evelyn Judy Buehler March 6, 2021 at 9:17 PM Trees are very beautiful, and keep our planet healthy. Your remarks are greatly appreciated, Belle.