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AUTUMN IS NEAR
Poem written for and submitted to “SEASONS NOW POETRY CONTEST,” August 6, 2025, Nette Onclaud, sponsor
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brushstroke of a cooler breeze paints my skin. golden rays slip behind the horizon, velvet curtain drawn across stage of sky. summer bows with grace; fall waits in the wings. cicadas' applause fades to hushed tones. the sun dips lower; the days grow shorter. green leaves slowly shift to ochre and rust. painter’s palette spilling across the ground, each leaf blends hues onto the earth’s canvas. with expectation, autumn holds its breath, a hush before the overture of chill. season’s harmonious intermission.

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Date: 8/7/2025 10:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "AUTUMN IS NEAR" write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:16:00 PM
thank you, Paula, for visiting and reading this poem. I think I read your poem yesterday...have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 8/7/2025 8:31:00 AM
An excellently, well fashioned piece of poetry - very well done! :) john
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:15:00 PM
aww, thank you John! Appreciate your visit and your kind words. Gratefully yours, Sara
Date: 8/7/2025 7:11:00 AM
- Yes, autumn is near ... we have already had our first storm this week ... but, the colors are not here yet - The temperature is low - A wonderful poem, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:15:00 PM
wow, a storm already! We still have such intense heat (107 degrees today). Pretty much the heat takes the color out of everything so we don't get much fall type colors. Thanks for visiting and for your kind words about my poem. hugs from Texas, Sara

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