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Summer’s fled – on the ground gold and red leaves are found. In the park is a swing. I’m a lark on the wing! Up I go swinging high in the glow of fall’s sky. Aug 19, 2021 For Joseph May's In Essence 2 Poetry Contest Picture #2 Sept. 4, 2021 for Line Gauthier's 'Bite Size Poem no.20' Poetry contes Contest

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Date: 9/16/2021 9:14:00 AM
Such joy and such freedom expressed Andrea! Nice melding of autumn and swinging in the park! Congratulations and high flying fives!
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Date: 9/16/2021 8:20:00 AM
Congrats. Short and sweet. Blessings.
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Date: 9/15/2021 9:17:00 PM
Very romantic with great poesy. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/28/2021 7:32:00 PM
Back with congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/28/2021 3:29:00 PM
Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/21/2021 4:57:00 PM
This is beautifully done! A treasure which enchants and enlightens... simply beautiful. God bless you dear friend. Much love to you, Gina
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Date: 8/21/2021 8:25:00 AM
I like it, Andrea, including, In the park there is a swing. I'm a lark on the wing!
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Date: 8/21/2021 1:29:00 AM
Beautiful one, Andrea, I loved the pictures Joseph provided us with, in fact, ended up writing 3 essence poems:)
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Date: 8/20/2021 9:54:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful!!! A winner for sure, Andrea...
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Date: 8/20/2021 5:10:00 AM
You have fulfilled the requirements of this contest, Andrea. My eyes went to the 2nd stanza straight away. Park/Lark, nice one...Delice
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Date: 8/20/2021 5:10:00 AM
Beautiful images in splendid rhymes. You always write winners, Andrea.
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Date: 8/20/2021 2:06:00 AM
Perfect. Loved it all the way. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 8/19/2021 9:19:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/19/2021 2:43:00 PM
This is a fun and lighthearted read; good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/19/2021 2:02:00 PM
And a beautiful season it is too Andrea, the heat of summer is coming to an end here and I'm looking forward to autumn already. Tom
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