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Autumn In the Park

Summer’s fled – on the ground
gold and red leaves are found.

In the park is a swing.
I’m a lark on the wing!

Up I go swinging high
in the glow of fall’s sky.

Aug 19, 2021
For Joseph May's In Essence 2 Poetry Contest Picture #2
 Sept. 4, 2021 for Line Gauthier's 'Bite Size Poem no.20' Poetry contes Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Such joy and such freedom expressed Andrea! Nice melding of autumn and swinging in the park! Congratulations and high flying fives!
Johnson Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Congrats. Short and sweet. Blessings.
Alex Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 9:17 PM
Very romantic with great poesy. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:32 PM
Back with congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
May Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win
Mcintosh Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 4:57 PM
This is beautifully done! A treasure which enchants and enlightens... simply beautiful. God bless you dear friend. Much love to you, Gina
Bayles Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 8:25 AM
I like it, Andrea, including, In the park there is a swing. I'm a lark on the wing!
Daniel Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 1:29 AM
Beautiful one, Andrea, I loved the pictures Joseph provided us with, in fact, ended up writing 3 essence poems:)
Kannan Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Absolutely beautiful!!! A winner for sure, Andrea...
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Beautiful images in splendid rhymes. You always write winners, Andrea.
Skelly Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 5:10 AM
You have fulfilled the requirements of this contest, Andrea. My eyes went to the 2nd stanza straight away. Park/Lark, nice one...Delice
Buhagiar Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 2:06 AM
Perfect. Loved it all the way. Best for a win. Hugs.
Roper Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 9:19 PM
Beautiful, Andrea, good luck in the contest.
Kiser Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 2:43 PM
This is a fun and lighthearted read; good luck in the contest.
Cunningham Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 2:02 PM
And a beautiful season it is too Andrea, the heat of summer is coming to an end here and I'm looking forward to autumn already. Tom
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