autumn hiku

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05/27/25

YOUR. CONTEST p

First Place

Contest by Brian Strand

auburn autumn ^ a p p e a s in ~~~~~~~ amiable ambience

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/29/2025 4:26:00 PM

How pretty, 'auburn autumn', very nice Anisha!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/29/2025 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations poet friend on your top win in Brian`s contest with a sweet write flowing smoothly. Wish you a pleasant day.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/28/2025 11:09:00 PM

Oh something iv never thought of “ auburn autumn” very clever! Love the assonance and alliterative nature of your hiku! Youv played around with words so well! Congratulations on your top win in Brians ! Sending you light! #teamhiku! Yeay!

Joseph May

Date: 5/28/2025 5:32:00 AM

Beautifully done Anisha, Soup mail