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Autumn Haze

autumn haze –
refugees search for 
a place to call home


2/1/16

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Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2016 at 5:39 PM

this is a very timely one, Susan. I am so happy to see you over here winning a contest. BIG congrats to you.

John Lawless

February 10, 2016 at 1:40 PM

A two pronged interpretation. One the natural scurrying of hibernationist seeking shelter a fall triggers their slumber or the devastation of a forest fire causing the flight of all seeking renewal.

Nette Onclaud

February 10, 2016 at 1:14 PM

a season;s beat.. sweet congrats on your award, susan!..huggs

Paul Callus

February 10, 2016 at 1:08 PM

Thinking about it, this compliments the picture really well! That sky reminds me of the problems which they have left behind. Congrats on a merited win. // paul