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Autumn Haiku

In lazy rhythm A supple umber leaf falls One's life passes by

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/9/2017 6:05:00 PM

I also like this poem. It is worded awsome. have a nice evening my friend.

Michael Jones
Date: 11/13/2017 11:10:00 AM

Thanks Darlene!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/13/2017 7:52:00 PM

A completely awesome haiku Michael. Each line is a gemstone that together makes a brilliant poem. Enjoyed!

Michael Jones
Date: 10/14/2017 12:57:00 PM

Thank you Susan. I appreciate the kind words!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2017 4:10:00 PM

beautifully descriptive Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Jones
Date: 10/14/2017 12:56:00 PM

Thanks Jan for the feedback!