Autumn Haiku

In lazy rhythm
A supple umber leaf falls
One's life passes by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:05 PM
I also like this poem. It is worded awsome. have a nice evening my friend.
Jones Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Thanks Darlene!
Ashley Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 7:52 PM
A completely awesome haiku Michael. Each line is a gemstone that together makes a brilliant poem. Enjoyed!
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Susan. I appreciate the kind words!
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 4:10 PM
beautifully descriptive Michael:-) hugs Jan xx
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Jan for the feedback!
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