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Autumn Haiku

how fragile is love
    as the bloom of romance chills…
          the fall in your eyes


                21 Oct 2015

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Jan Allison

November 9, 2015 at 1:31 PM

very beautiful David many congrats on your win in the trashed #3 contest:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

November 9, 2015 at 11:08 AM

David, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2015 at 7:02 PM

'a shame if this is the one you were telling me about that did not place. It is wonderful, David. I love the symbolism

David Mohn

October 28, 2015 at 7:37 PM

thanks so much for the nice comment Andrea, I do value your opinion :)

Paul Callus

October 23, 2015 at 12:16 PM

A single haiku that is worth a lot! Excellent, David; great end line. ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

October 23, 2015 at 12:00 PM

Great work..Way to go..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

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