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Autumn Haiku

AUTUMN shivered yellow sun struck by autumn demureness scurries to the west

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/1/2014 9:13:00 AM
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Dear Rajat: A nice haiku moment you have here. All the best then, Leon.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/1/2014 9:37:00 AM
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Thank you Leon, Love::::rajat
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/31/2014 3:54:00 PM
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Wow! This is another beautiful write! The imagery is fantastic! I can clearly see the young girls scurrying away like the autumn leaves... Warmest regards. Pandita
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/1/2014 12:48:00 AM
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You have explained this poem very beautifully, from another perspective, how sweet Pandita. LOVE ......rajat
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/25/2014 4:44:00 AM
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Autumn does try to pretend to be like summer, but the sun gives the game away! Love the last line! // paul
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/25/2014 8:18:00 AM
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Village girls in India are very modest and shy. When some unknown visitor drops in they just hurry off but the situation is changing very fast since 90s. This fact was in my mind while wiring this poem. Thank you Paul for visiting. Love.RAJAT
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/24/2014 8:14:00 AM
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What Andrea said. She is usually dead on. I totally agree. An excellent write.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/24/2014 8:23:00 AM
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Thanks Maurice. Love.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 3:46:00 AM
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excellent picture golden beautiful pal
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/24/2014 5:29:00 AM
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Thank you liam for your excellent comment. love:-) rajat
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2014 7:30:00 PM
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oh YES, I really like this one. Love the personification.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 10/24/2014 1:11:00 AM
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Andra dear, love....:-) rajat

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