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AUTUMN haiku

AUTUMN shivered yellow sun struck by autumn demureness scurries to the west

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Date: 11/1/2014 9:13:00 AM
Dear Rajat: A nice haiku moment you have here. All the best then, Leon.
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RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
Date: 11/1/2014 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Leon, Love::::rajat
Date: 10/31/2014 3:54:00 PM
Wow! This is another beautiful write! The imagery is fantastic! I can clearly see the young girls scurrying away like the autumn leaves... Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 11/1/2014 12:48:00 AM
You have explained this poem very beautifully, from another perspective, how sweet Pandita. LOVE ......rajat
Date: 10/25/2014 4:44:00 AM
Autumn does try to pretend to be like summer, but the sun gives the game away! Love the last line! // paul
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Date: 10/25/2014 8:18:00 AM
Village girls in India are very modest and shy. When some unknown visitor drops in they just hurry off but the situation is changing very fast since 90s. This fact was in my mind while wiring this poem. Thank you Paul for visiting. Love.RAJAT
Date: 10/24/2014 8:14:00 AM
What Andrea said. She is usually dead on. I totally agree. An excellent write.
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Date: 10/24/2014 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Maurice. Love.
Date: 10/24/2014 3:46:00 AM
excellent picture golden beautiful pal
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Date: 10/24/2014 5:29:00 AM
Thank you liam for your excellent comment. love:-) rajat
Date: 10/23/2014 7:30:00 PM
oh YES, I really like this one. Love the personification.
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Date: 10/24/2014 1:11:00 AM
Andra dear, love....:-) rajat