Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Haiku

Autumn Haiku

AUTUMN
                                             shivered  yellow sun
                                      struck by autumn demureness
                                             scurries to the west

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Leon Enriquez November 1, 2014 at 9:13 AM Dear Rajat: A nice haiku moment you have here. All the best then, Leon. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 1, 2014 at 9:37 AM Thank you Leon, Love::::rajat

Pandita Sietesantos October 31, 2014 at 3:54 PM Wow! This is another beautiful write! The imagery is fantastic! I can clearly see the young girls scurrying away like the autumn leaves... Warmest regards. Pandita Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 1, 2014 at 12:48 AM You have explained this poem very beautifully, from another perspective, how sweet Pandita. LOVE ......rajat

Paul Callus October 25, 2014 at 4:44 AM Autumn does try to pretend to be like summer, but the sun gives the game away! Love the last line! // paul Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 25, 2014 at 8:18 AM Village girls in India are very modest and shy. When some unknown visitor drops in they just hurry off but the situation is changing very fast since 90s. This fact was in my mind while wiring this poem. Thank you Paul for visiting. Love.RAJAT

Maurice Yvonne October 24, 2014 at 8:14 AM What Andrea said. She is usually dead on. I totally agree. An excellent write. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 24, 2014 at 8:23 AM Thanks Maurice. Love.

Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 3:46 AM excellent picture golden beautiful pal Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 24, 2014 at 5:29 AM Thank you liam for your excellent comment. love:-) rajat

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2014 at 7:30 PM oh YES, I really like this one. Love the personification. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 24, 2014 at 1:11 AM Andra dear, love....:-) rajat