Autumn Haiku

lustrous hair spun gold

Autumn lies on buttered leaves

sunset on her lips
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Henderson Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 9:03 PM
Eiken, I am wowed by how well this perfect haiku is written. Many older poets just do not seem to get the cut.
Mehta Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 12:52 PM
This is quite perfect haiku, Aiken
Pettit Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 10:53 PM
It is amazing how such few words can contain vivid descriptiveness. You have completely captured a picturesque autumn season here.
Parker Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 3:06 PM
Luminous luster that shines so bright! Enjoyed your lurid, Autumn scenery!
Fillmore Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 3:06 PM
beautiful imagery:) Thanks so much for your comment on my recent post, much appreciated!
Mehta Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Nice pen picture of autumn klying buttered with rosy lips, Eiken
Chappell Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 2:09 PM
very nice thank you my friend
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