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Autumn Haiku

lustrous hair spun gold Autumn lies on buttered leaves sunset on her lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 9:03:00 PM
Eiken, I am wowed by how well this perfect haiku is written. Many older poets just do not seem to get the cut.
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Date: 12/29/2010 12:52:00 PM
This is quite perfect haiku, Aiken
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Date: 12/28/2010 10:53:00 PM
It is amazing how such few words can contain vivid descriptiveness. You have completely captured a picturesque autumn season here.
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:06:00 PM
Luminous luster that shines so bright! Enjoyed your lurid, Autumn scenery!
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:06:00 PM
beautiful imagery:) Thanks so much for your comment on my recent post, much appreciated!
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:00:00 PM
Nice pen picture of autumn klying buttered with rosy lips, Eiken
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Date: 12/28/2010 2:09:00 PM
very nice thank you my friend
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