autumn haiku

burnt orange leaves on vines
cover a fence in autumn
spiderweb playground 

a rippling field bends
tall cornstalks dance head to head
wild rhythms of fall

eerie sounds at dusk
send a tingling chill of fright
first cat fight of fall
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Croft Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 12:36 PM
Lovely autumn haiku!
Leiser Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 3:14 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Jones Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 7:31 PM
These are all great! They flow well and the imagery is very vivid! Love it!
Leiser Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, Karen! Glad you enjoyed these! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 3:17 PM
Love the observations and especially the final ku!
Leiser Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 8:58 PM
Thanks, Kim! Glad you enjoyed these haiku! :)
Smith Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Love poems on Autumn Laura. Love the changing color of leaves. This poem really great and your descriptions paint pictures that are true to life and do justice to an underrated season. Happy New Year Laura and many more of them. I turned 71 on the 1st and thankfully have most of my marbles. Aced a dementia test in at end of 2024. 2016 I found the soup. And been reading great poetry like yours ever since.
Leiser Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 7:35 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, David! I hope you have a bright and happy New Year! Keep writing! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 1:25 AM
- A wonderful trio of haiku, Laura :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs
Leiser Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 7:35 PM
Always good when a season particularly autumn is pictured in a new light. Thank you for this image. penned to good effect. regards David in NZ
Leiser Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 7:59 PM
Thanks, David! :)
Lowe Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 10:52 AM
A beautiful Haiku canvassing. Thanks for the enjoyable share. One. Peace and Love.
Leiser Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, Millard! :)
Rolland Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 6:14 PM
so delicious images, and fall atmosphere, enjoyed, thanks poet, best wishes
Leiser Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Thank you, Yann! :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 2:25 PM
Ohhh great imagery in your haiku set. Gotta fave this
Leiser Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 9:37 AM
Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate that! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 1:33 PM
Love the third verse!
Leiser Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 4:21 PM
Thank you, Kim! Happy you stopped by to comment! :(
Rodgers Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 10:58 AM
Dear Laura, I love a great Haiku, I love the Autumn season and I really loved your Haikus and it continues to get me more and more in the mood of the season. - BLessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Leiser Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:57 PM
Thank you, Daniel for stopping by to comment! I’m so happy you enjoyed my autumn haiku! :)
Radice Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 6:12 AM
All these are superb Laura but, heck, I just love that second one. The imagery digs deep. Cheers - Gary
Leiser Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 6:43 AM
Thank you, Gary! Glad you liked my collection of haiku! :)
Meadows Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 2:17 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Thank you, Daisy! :)
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