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autumn haiku

burnt orange leaves on vines cover a fence in autumn spiderweb playground a rippling field bends tall cornstalks dance head to head wild rhythms of fall eerie sounds at dusk send a tingling chill of fright first cat fight of fall

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Karen Jones

Date: 2/26/2025 7:31:00 PM

These are all great! They flow well and the imagery is very vivid! Love it!

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/27/2025 8:43:00 PM

Thank you, Karen! Glad you enjoyed these! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/19/2025 3:17:00 PM

Love the observations and especially the final ku!

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/19/2025 8:58:00 PM

Thanks, Kim! Glad you enjoyed these haiku! :)

David Smith

Date: 1/1/2025 3:54:00 PM

Love poems on Autumn Laura. Love the changing color of leaves. This poem really great and your descriptions paint pictures that are true to life and do justice to an underrated season. Happy New Year Laura and many more of them. I turned 71 on the 1st and thankfully have most of my marbles. Aced a dementia test in at end of 2024. 2016 I found the soup. And been reading great poetry like yours ever since.

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/9/2025 7:35:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments, David! I hope you have a bright and happy New Year! Keep writing! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2024 1:25:00 AM

- A wonderful trio of haiku, Laura :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/23/2024 8:43:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

David Smith

Date: 10/28/2024 7:35:00 PM

Always good when a season particularly autumn is pictured in a new light. Thank you for this image. penned to good effect. regards David in NZ

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/28/2024 7:59:00 PM

Thanks, David! :)

Millard Lowe

Date: 10/4/2024 10:52:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku canvassing. Thanks for the enjoyable share. One. Peace and Love.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/6/2024 8:35:00 PM

Thank you, Millard! :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/29/2024 6:14:00 PM

so delicious images, and fall atmosphere, enjoyed, thanks poet, best wishes

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/30/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thank you, Yann! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2024 2:25:00 PM

Ohhh great imagery in your haiku set. Gotta fave this

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/30/2024 9:37:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate that! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/25/2024 1:33:00 PM

Love the third verse!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/25/2024 4:21:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! Happy you stopped by to comment! :(

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/25/2024 10:58:00 AM

Dear Laura, I love a great Haiku, I love the Autumn season and I really loved your Haikus and it continues to get me more and more in the mood of the season. - BLessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/25/2024 12:57:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel for stopping by to comment! I’m so happy you enjoyed my autumn haiku! :)