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autumn haiku

burnt orange leaves on vines
cover a fence in autumn
spiderweb playground 

a rippling field bends
tall cornstalks dance head to head
wild rhythms of fall

eerie sounds at dusk
send a tingling chill of fright
first cat fight of fall

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Karen Jones Date: 2/26/2025 7:31:00 PM These are all great! They flow well and the imagery is very vivid! Love it! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 2/27/2025 8:43:00 PM Thank you, Karen! Glad you enjoyed these! :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/19/2025 3:17:00 PM Love the observations and especially the final ku! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 2/19/2025 8:58:00 PM Thanks, Kim! Glad you enjoyed these haiku! :)

David Smith Date: 1/1/2025 3:54:00 PM Love poems on Autumn Laura. Love the changing color of leaves. This poem really great and your descriptions paint pictures that are true to life and do justice to an underrated season. Happy New Year Laura and many more of them. I turned 71 on the 1st and thankfully have most of my marbles. Aced a dementia test in at end of 2024. 2016 I found the soup. And been reading great poetry like yours ever since. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 1/9/2025 7:35:00 PM Thank you for your kind comments, David! I hope you have a bright and happy New Year! Keep writing! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/23/2024 1:25:00 AM - A wonderful trio of haiku, Laura :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 11/23/2024 8:43:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

David Smith Date: 10/28/2024 7:35:00 PM Always good when a season particularly autumn is pictured in a new light. Thank you for this image. penned to good effect. regards David in NZ Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 10/28/2024 7:59:00 PM Thanks, David! :)

Millard Lowe Date: 10/4/2024 10:52:00 AM A beautiful Haiku canvassing. Thanks for the enjoyable share. One. Peace and Love. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 10/6/2024 8:35:00 PM Thank you, Millard! :)

Yann Rolland Date: 9/29/2024 6:14:00 PM so delicious images, and fall atmosphere, enjoyed, thanks poet, best wishes Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 9/30/2024 9:38:00 AM Thank you, Yann! :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/29/2024 2:25:00 PM Ohhh great imagery in your haiku set. Gotta fave this Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 9/30/2024 9:37:00 AM Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate that! :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/25/2024 1:33:00 PM Love the third verse! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 9/25/2024 4:21:00 PM Thank you, Kim! Happy you stopped by to comment! :(

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 9/25/2024 10:58:00 AM Dear Laura, I love a great Haiku, I love the Autumn season and I really loved your Haikus and it continues to get me more and more in the mood of the season. - BLessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 9/25/2024 12:57:00 PM Thank you, Daniel for stopping by to comment! I’m so happy you enjoyed my autumn haiku! :)

Tom Woody Date: 9/25/2024 6:32:00 AM Lovely haikus Laura, but it's the third one I like. Unique and different Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 9/25/2024 6:44:00 AM Thank you, Tom! I was recollecting the crazy cat fights I heard growing up when we had our cats, lol! :)

Gary Radice Date: 9/25/2024 6:12:00 AM All these are superb Laura but, heck, I just love that second one. The imagery digs deep. Cheers - Gary Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 9/25/2024 6:43:00 AM Thank you, Gary! Glad you liked my collection of haiku! :)

Daisy Meadows Date: 9/25/2024 2:17:00 AM A lovely poem. Well done. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 9/25/2024 6:40:00 AM Thank you, Daisy! :)