Autumn Fallings

As the fall is apon us I feel anew
Seeing all the beauty that is in you
Our story so untold 
I cannot wait for it to unfold
You are  so unexpected 
I keep waiting for the ball to drop or be rejected 
I have waited all my life to meet someone who 
Could make me feel all the feels that you do 
Your sweet and kind in all the best ways
I feel so inadequate in what I write and say
You make me feel unquestionably alive
In just being good and kind to you I strive
How can I possibly match the way you make me feel 
When I need to pinch myself just to confirm you're real
Those brown eyes matching all the colors I hold dear
You alone washing away all my life's fears
I will stay sted fast as cold sets in 
Keeping you warm till winters end

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Date: 11/12/2023 2:01:00 PM
Loved this! You spirit is so magical.
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Date: 11/12/2023 4:13:00 PM
I appreciate you greatly for taking the time to read some of these older works! It's a good reminder, that in the growth I've found there's still much more growth to be had. Reverently A.S.
Date: 4/8/2023 11:55:00 AM
I guess you are not too new here. I just don't remember if I have seen many of your poems before . It's wonderful to find extraordinary friends,
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Date: 4/8/2023 12:22:00 PM
I whole heartedly agree this group is extrordinary in there support!
Date: 4/5/2023 12:42:00 PM
wow, what a remarkable first post this is. Sorry I am first one to comment on it. It's very emotive.
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Date: 4/5/2023 12:47:00 PM
No sorrow should ever be felt. The Muse behind this poem is an exceptionally extraordinary friend that I care deeply about. I very much appreciate that you're the first comment on it. Warmly A.S.
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