Autumn Fades Winter Begins

skeletal branches
plummeting temperatures  ~
a coating of frost 



Written 9th September 2019.

Syllable count 5/7/5

A Transition Of Seasons Haiku Poetry Contest.

Sponsored by Tania Kitchin.
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George Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:35 AM
A lovely haiku showing nature's change in the cusp between autumn and winter
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:43 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm happy you enjoyed it.. Hope your day is going well. Tom
Perrin Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 3:23 AM
Congratulations Tom :-) A beautiful seasonal write x
Cunningham Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Thank you Elaine, just off to the airport, heading home from Turkey. Tom
Chiri Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 2:16 AM
Wonderful write my friend!;)
Cunningham Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 4:55 AM
Thank you very much Brenda, hope all's well. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 10:35 AM
Hi Tom, what powerful words to describe the exit of one season and the entry of another - congratulations Tom on your win - great Haiku. Blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 4:54 AM
Thank you Jennifer, hope the packing is going well. Tom
Callus Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Your three lines paint a bridge crossing from one season to another, Tom. I do not look forward to a cold winter! Congrats on your win. Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 5:17 PM
Thanks very much Paul, as you get older the cold loses its appeal, remember building snowmen for the kids while they looked from the window now I'd prefer to stay by the fire lol. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 6:36 PM
all great images for fall, and congrats on the win.
Cunningham Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Thanks very much Andrea, Tom
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 3:43 AM
You have painted a departing Autumn and a freezing winter eloquently and in a striking flair! A wonderful work of Art worthy of your Win! Congratulations, Tom! Best regards and blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 4:44 AM
Thank you very much Besma, I'm pleased you like it. Hope you are well. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 10:37 PM
Wow Tom...I love your entry! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 3:21 AM
Thanks very much Connie, glad you liked it. Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 10:02 AM
This has to be one of my favourites. Congratulations on your win! xomo
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Thanks Maureen, happy you liked it. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:58 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:01 PM
Thanks Anne, won't be long until we have our frosts. Tom.
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Great imagery of both seasons coming together. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:15 AM
Thanks very much Eve. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your win, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:15 AM
Thanks very much Line. Tom.
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Tom, am delighted for your news do send me more pics xxx:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:15 AM
Thanks Jan, what is it about hospitals, they seem to drain You.lol. No worries', ill sort a few out. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Tom, congratulations on your winning placement, beautiful winter imagery!
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:13 AM
Thank you very much Tania, the haiku contest's fill up very fast, got in by the skin of my teeth lol. Thanks too for hosting. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 5:05 PM
impressive 'ku, tom... greeat work!...huggs
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:11 AM
Thank you very.much.nette. Tom
Romios Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Good one, Tom
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:11 AM
Thank you Panagiota, hope you had a great time. Tom
Sands Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:55 AM
This sure shows it Tom. Well done :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:10 AM
Thanks very much Heidi. Tom
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:43 AM
Yes--indeed..winter arrives with gusto. All the best, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:10 AM
Thanks very much Vijay, they're forcasting a bad winter this year, but then they do every year lol. Tom
Michael Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:32 AM
You know it's coming...Nice imagery...
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:38 AM
Thanks Arturo, must admit I love the variety of the seasons. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:09 AM
- The transition from autumn to winter ... not a smooth transition ... often a brutal transition - Greatly written, Tom - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:20 AM
Thanks Sunshine, one day you're enjoying a mild spell and it can change at the drop.of a hat when the wind blows. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:12 AM
- My haiku for this contest is called - autumn :)
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:37 AM
simply lovely haiku Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:41 AM
Thanks Jan, Saw this yesterday and thought I've got plenty of time, woke at silly o'clock, one space left lol. Yesterday was a blur. Tom
Mcintosh Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 1:05 AM
I love this. It's perfect and I wish you all my best. Blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:39 AM
Thanks very much Regina, I'm pleased you like it. Tom.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:58 AM
Love it Tom. A haiku that makes sense and is beautiful. Good luck in the contest!
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 2:38 AM
Thanks very much Caren, Tom
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