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Autumn fades Winter begins

skeletal branches plummeting temperatures ~ a coating of frost Written 9th September 2019. Syllable count 5/7/5 A Transition Of Seasons Haiku Poetry Contest. Sponsored by Tania Kitchin.

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Date: 10/2/2019 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations Tom :-) A beautiful seasonal write x
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/2/2019 6:45:00 AM
Thank you Elaine, just off to the airport, heading home from Turkey. Tom
Date: 9/15/2019 2:16:00 AM
Wonderful write my friend!;)
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Date: 9/15/2019 4:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Brenda, hope all's well. Tom
Date: 9/14/2019 10:35:00 AM
Hi Tom, what powerful words to describe the exit of one season and the entry of another - congratulations Tom on your win - great Haiku. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/15/2019 4:54:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer, hope the packing is going well. Tom
Date: 9/13/2019 4:03:00 PM
Your three lines paint a bridge crossing from one season to another, Tom. I do not look forward to a cold winter! Congrats on your win. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/13/2019 5:17:00 PM
Thanks very much Paul, as you get older the cold loses its appeal, remember building snowmen for the kids while they looked from the window now I'd prefer to stay by the fire lol. Tom
Date: 9/12/2019 6:36:00 PM
all great images for fall, and congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/13/2019 5:15:00 PM
Thanks very much Andrea, Tom
Date: 9/12/2019 3:43:00 AM
You have painted a departing Autumn and a freezing winter eloquently and in a striking flair! A wonderful work of Art worthy of your Win! Congratulations, Tom! Best regards and blessings.
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Date: 9/12/2019 4:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Besma, I'm pleased you like it. Hope you are well. Tom
Date: 9/11/2019 10:37:00 PM
Wow Tom...I love your entry! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Date: 9/12/2019 3:21:00 AM
Thanks very much Connie, glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 9/11/2019 10:02:00 AM
This has to be one of my favourites. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, happy you liked it. Tom
Date: 9/11/2019 3:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Anne, won't be long until we have our frosts. Tom.
Date: 9/10/2019 8:13:00 PM
Great imagery of both seasons coming together. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:15:00 AM
Thanks very much Eve. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 7:31:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your win, Tom.
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:15:00 AM
Thanks very much Line. Tom.
Date: 9/10/2019 7:01:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Tom, am delighted for your news do send me more pics xxx:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:15:00 AM
Thanks Jan, what is it about hospitals, they seem to drain You.lol. No worries', ill sort a few out. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 6:33:00 PM
Tom, congratulations on your winning placement, beautiful winter imagery!
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Tania, the haiku contest's fill up very fast, got in by the skin of my teeth lol. Thanks too for hosting. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 5:05:00 PM
impressive 'ku, tom... greeat work!...huggs
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:11:00 AM
Thank you very.much.nette. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 7:21:00 AM
Good one, Tom
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:11:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota, hope you had a great time. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 6:55:00 AM
This sure shows it Tom. Well done :)
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:10:00 AM
Thanks very much Heidi. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 6:43:00 AM
Yes--indeed..winter arrives with gusto. All the best, Tom.
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:10:00 AM
Thanks very much Vijay, they're forcasting a bad winter this year, but then they do every year lol. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 3:32:00 AM
You know it's coming...Nice imagery...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/10/2019 3:38:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, must admit I love the variety of the seasons. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 3:09:00 AM
- The transition from autumn to winter ... not a smooth transition ... often a brutal transition - Greatly written, Tom - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/10/2019 3:20:00 AM
Thanks Sunshine, one day you're enjoying a mild spell and it can change at the drop.of a hat when the wind blows. Tom
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:12:00 AM
- My haiku for this contest is called - autumn :)
Date: 9/10/2019 1:37:00 AM
simply lovely haiku Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2019 2:41:00 AM
Thanks Jan, Saw this yesterday and thought I've got plenty of time, woke at silly o'clock, one space left lol. Yesterday was a blur. Tom
Date: 9/10/2019 1:05:00 AM
I love this. It's perfect and I wish you all my best. Blessings.
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Date: 9/10/2019 2:39:00 AM
Thanks very much Regina, I'm pleased you like it. Tom.
Date: 9/10/2019 12:58:00 AM
Love it Tom. A haiku that makes sense and is beautiful. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 9/10/2019 2:38:00 AM
Thanks very much Caren, Tom