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Autumn Evening

crisp chills at even purple sun's among the stars moon tangoes with Mars gone the pinks and blues prim garden club's adjourning quite disappointing squirrels gather nuts red maple leaves in motion green pine devotion such black cherry skies memories of morning gone joys 'ere shades are drawn
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Williams Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 12:38 AM
A beautiful garland of Haiku's Evelyn which brought out the colours and the changing season with nature getting ready for the winter. Loved it - Hugs Maria
Buehler Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much for delighting me with your lovely comments. Hugs. :)
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September 12, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Hello Evelyn, i love the images of this opoem. Fall is a beautiful season with the colors of the leaves. Hugs. /Darlene/
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September 13, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Hello Evelyn, I hope all is well with you. Oh, you are welcome. I am happy to hear this. I am happy you have a smile on your face. Hugs. /Darlene/
Buehler Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Hello Darlene. I thank you very much for your kind remarks. They bring smiles into my day. Hugs. :)
Rodgers Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 4:31 AM
Dear Evelyn, I loved your descriptors and images and so wonderful how it read. I love Autumn and you have brought out the best of it. So well inked!! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Buehler Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 5:07 PM
Dear Daniel, Your inspiring words bring great joy. Thank you so much for letting me know what you liked about this poem. Blessings and hugs. :)
Vaso Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 10:49 PM
Beautiful, my favorite season.
Buehler Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 5:01 PM
Deepest thanks, Arthur.
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 6:22 PM
This is just absolutely stunning dear Evelyn, as always! And i cant help but be in awe of your imagery and the smooth flow of words! Youv written such beautifully haiku with colors etc. i love the. Idea of the moon that tangoes with mars! How imaginative! Another new fave for me! Sending you light always talented soul
Buehler Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely insights, and your buoying words of encouragement and support, dear friend. I am also gladdened by your fave and wishes. Many blessings. :)
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