Eve Roper Poet Diminished Hexaverse

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A Grounding Technique Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick written 12/7/2024

1. five things you can see
2. four things you can feel
3. three things you can hear
4. two things you can smell
5. one thing you can taste

 diminished hexaverse form to do this one.
5 stanzas like this, stanza 1: 5 lines 5 syllables per line,
stanza 2: 4 lines, 4 syllables per line
stanza 3: 3 lines, 3 syllables per line,
stanza 4: 2 lines, 2 syllables per line
last stanza 5: one line, one syllable..

Autumn Early Morning

honey rays sunbeams
enter through window
old oak tree's leaves dance
squirrel run up trunk
mate sits on back fence

feel recliner
yorkie silk hair
porcelain cup
forced vent warm air

news station
dog barking
ears ringing

coffee
bacon

eggs

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Paula Goldsmith December 18, 2024 at 8:22 AM Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful Morning write. Coffee with bacon/eggs sounds great. You cooking??? I will be over... Hahaha!!! Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........

Sara Kendrick December 17, 2024 at 3:47 AM I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. Mornings are so wonderful and yours sound exceptional. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

thriveni c mysore December 16, 2024 at 8:41 PM Coffee!! congratulations dear poet. Cheers!

Kim Rodrigues December 16, 2024 at 2:10 PM Especially the 3rd verse…chaotic. Congrats, Eve!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2024 at 9:46 AM - Back with a congrats, Eve :) - hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2024 at 5:34 AM - A tasty meal, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest (I made gingerbread:))) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar December 7, 2024 at 3:25 AM You end up with breakfast menus. I only take tea, one slice of bread, and plenty of poisonous pills. Hugs.