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A Grounding Technique Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick written 12/7/2024

1. five things you can see
2. four things you can feel
3. three things you can hear
4. two things you can smell
5. one thing you can taste

 diminished hexaverse form to do this one.
5 stanzas like this, stanza 1: 5 lines 5 syllables per line,
stanza 2: 4 lines, 4 syllables per line
stanza 3: 3 lines, 3 syllables per line,
stanza 4: 2 lines, 2 syllables per line
last stanza 5: one line, one syllable..
honey rays sunbeams enter through window old oak tree's leaves dance squirrel run up trunk mate sits on back fence feel recliner yorkie silk hair porcelain cup forced vent warm air news station dog barking ears ringing coffee bacon eggs

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Date: 12/18/2024 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful Morning write. Coffee with bacon/eggs sounds great. You cooking??? I will be over... Hahaha!!! Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........
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Date: 12/17/2024 3:47:00 AM
I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. Mornings are so wonderful and yours sound exceptional. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 12/16/2024 8:41:00 PM
Coffee!! congratulations dear poet. Cheers!
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Date: 12/16/2024 2:10:00 PM
Especially the 3rd verse…chaotic. Congrats, Eve!
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Date: 12/16/2024 9:46:00 AM
- Back with a congrats, Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 12/7/2024 5:34:00 AM
- A tasty meal, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest (I made gingerbread:))) - hugs
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Date: 12/7/2024 3:25:00 AM
You end up with breakfast menus. I only take tea, one slice of bread, and plenty of poisonous pills. Hugs.
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