James Inman Poet Cinquain

Autumn Dreams

Autumn,
quixotic dreams,
broken summer, fallen,
dramatic colors are screaming,
softly.

Walking
     over snapping
          twigs, echoed melodies.
               Metallic tasting cooling breeze,
whispers.

Gentle,
fluttering leaves 
tickle aspirant skin,
falling caressingly from trees,
teasing.

Serene
     setting calling,
          lazy fragrant autumn 
               flowers echo stained foliage,
beauty.


10/23/15

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Skat A October 29, 2015 at 9:07 PM James, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT James Inman October 30, 2015 at 9:16 AM Thanks SKAT

Kim Merryman October 28, 2015 at 9:49 PM Excellent imagery and word usage, James! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim James Inman October 29, 2015 at 6:50 AM Thank you Kim, very nice of you to say.

John Beam October 27, 2015 at 5:54 PM Congrats on your win James. Really like the rarely used words great Job. James Inman October 29, 2015 at 6:48 AM Thanks for the kind words, John.

Charlotte Puddifoot October 27, 2015 at 5:50 PM this is one of the best ones i've read, very good use of language, i like your writing - congrats on your win! James Inman October 29, 2015 at 6:48 AM Charlotte, thank you for reading my poem and for the wonderful comment.

Elis Artis October 23, 2015 at 1:40 PM I love it! I love the form and everything! You're so talented James Inman October 23, 2015 at 2:07 PM Thank you Elis.