JC Brul Poet Verse

Autumn Dream

Sky
blushing~
trees in bronze
dance as leaves fall,
carpeting the earth
in brown, gold and yellow;
A gentle gypsy wind
blows down the meadow
exuding scent
of old rose~
I smell
YOU.


22.09.2021

MERSE- Beauty Of Fall Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Malabika Choudhury
1st place

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Line Gauthier December 14, 2022 at 7:53 AM sweet imagery ~

Caren Krutsinger April 9, 2022 at 12:42 AM "A gentle gypsy wind" - ahhhhhhhh......

Danka Sikorska February 18, 2022 at 12:18 PM Fall is my favorite season and I really like the way you captured it! :)

Valsa George January 3, 2022 at 3:22 AM I don't know what MERSE is. But enjoyed this poem much and its alignment ! I sense the smell of flowers and hear the fall of leaves.....JCB

Susan Lawrence November 4, 2021 at 12:24 PM Beautiful … I feel this … the images, the scent and the softly falling leaves . Congratulations Utica on your win. Blessings, Susan :)

Susan Ashley October 29, 2021 at 8:42 PM My dear friend, your creative pen displays your poetic skill so beautifully. Your lovely imagery blows through my mind on a gentle gypsy wind. Exquisite poetry, JCB. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes, sweet poetess.. ~Susan

Paulette Calasibetta October 25, 2021 at 4:48 PM Unica, this is a beautiful piece filled with touching imagery. Lovely! Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith October 17, 2021 at 12:21 PM Your "Autumn Dream" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away................

Anitha Jayasankar October 3, 2021 at 7:23 AM Beautiful and magical... with your unique style dear... Congrats on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2021 at 5:57 PM wow, how did I not see this before? This is wonderful! And I see a congrats is in order too. Way to go.

Beata Agustin September 27, 2021 at 11:08 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, kabayan, making me delight virtually in the wonders of Autumn, here in our "Autumnless" country. God bless you... (Ok ang Unica Hija... )

Eve Roper September 27, 2021 at 9:21 PM I am back to say, I like your name on your poems.

Eve Roper September 26, 2021 at 10:52 AM Great feeling and imagery , JCB , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 26, 2021 at 6:05 AM congratulations on your win, JCB. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed.

Rama Balasubramanian September 22, 2021 at 8:56 AM Lovely. Loved the ending. Superb