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Autumn Dream

Sky
blushing~
trees in bronze
dance as leaves fall,
carpeting the earth
in brown, gold and yellow;
A gentle gypsy wind
blows down the meadow
exuding scent
of old rose~
I smell
YOU.


22.09.2021

MERSE- Beauty Of Fall Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Malabika Choudhury
1st place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/14/2022 7:53:00 AM

sweet imagery ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/9/2022 12:42:00 AM

"A gentle gypsy wind" - ahhhhhhhh......

Danka Sikorska

Date: 2/18/2022 12:18:00 PM

Fall is my favorite season and I really like the way you captured it! :)

Valsa George

Date: 1/3/2022 3:22:00 AM

I don't know what MERSE is. But enjoyed this poem much and its alignment ! I sense the smell of flowers and hear the fall of leaves.....JCB

Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/4/2021 12:24:00 PM

Beautiful … I feel this … the images, the scent and the softly falling leaves . Congratulations Utica on your win. Blessings, Susan :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/29/2021 8:42:00 PM

My dear friend, your creative pen displays your poetic skill so beautifully. Your lovely imagery blows through my mind on a gentle gypsy wind. Exquisite poetry, JCB. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes, sweet poetess.. ~Susan

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/25/2021 4:48:00 PM

Unica, this is a beautiful piece filled with touching imagery. Lovely! Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2021 12:21:00 PM

Your "Autumn Dream" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away................

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/3/2021 7:23:00 AM

Beautiful and magical... with your unique style dear... Congrats on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:57:00 PM

wow, how did I not see this before? This is wonderful! And I see a congrats is in order too. Way to go.

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/27/2021 11:08:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, kabayan, making me delight virtually in the wonders of Autumn, here in our "Autumnless" country. God bless you... (Ok ang Unica Hija... )