Autumn Colours

on the highway from Tokyo to Naruko valley
all over it was a beautiful riot of colours
we clicked and clicked all the way up the alley           
on the highway from Tokyo to Naruko valley 
orange and yellow leaves danced down like a belle     
raindrops adding lovely shine to the leaf runners
on the highway from Tokyo to Naruko valley
all over it was a beautiful riot of colours

Date: 6.9.2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:06 PM
Congratulations on your fine win. This was so cute and personal for autumn.
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:10 AM
Thanx Andrea for your appreciation. Naruko valley was a lovely unforgettable experience with abundant colorful nature.
Lindley Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Congrats on this fine win !!!
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:11 AM
Thanx Robert.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 7:12 PM
Congratulations on your win Mohan.
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:11 AM
Thanx Brenda.
Gibson Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Beautiful, Mohan; love what you did with this form. Congratulations.
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:13 AM
Thanx Faye, triolet is one of my favourites.
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 12:20 PM
congrats on your win in my contest, great job
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:14 AM
Thanx Francine for my placement in your contest and your appreciation. Mohan
Yvonne Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely triolet.
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:15 AM
Thanx Maurice for your appreciation.
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:20 AM
- A lovely 4 st place, Mohan - Congrats with your winning poem in the contest: "Autumn Colours" - The summer is over, it disappeared just as quickly as it came :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:16 AM
Thanx Anne, nice to see your different avatar.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:15 AM
beautiful triolet many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:17 AM
Thanx Jan for your constant appreciation.
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 11:06 PM
this is a really cute triolet. Do you mean by clicking that you were taking pictures of the scenery?
Chutani Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:13 AM
of course Andrea. it is also used as an imagery to say how joyful we felt all the way seeing lovely autumn colours that we wanted to capture them forever. Cheers!
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