for Mohan Chutani's Let's Minichu On Colours Of Autumn Poetry Contest
Orange pumpkin fellow watches October’s moon from his nice front lawn view - full yellow! Dying rose bed sees forest green leaves turning to blood red Not cold is fall’s warm hue - Gold. Orange pumpkin fellow sees forest green leaves turning to gold!
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