Autumn Coats

The stubborn trees remain in green,
Annoyed to change too soon,
Like people who wear P.J.’s 
Several hours after noon.

Their friends have donned their autumn coats
In oranges and golds,
With acorns brought by squirrels
Tucked away inside the folds.

The ochres and the emeralds mingle
On the highway’s edge,
Providing pops of color
As the rain performs its dredge.

Drawing closer to the city,
All the muted colors fade
‘Cause their city cousins aren’t dressed yet
For the fall parade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duggan Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Hi ilene, yes you are in your Autumn, I have seen pictures of your beautiful Autumn's, the colours amaze me, this is a lovely poem on the way your Autumn emerges, we are in our spring and it still seems like winter but I suppose it will be hotting up soon and then we will be moaning about the heat, hope you are well, take care my friend.......Vera
Turner Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 6:28 PM
Maybe they don't have as far to travel. Lol This is a wonderful take on autumn, Ilene. City life always did seem a little drab, to me.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Absolutely delightful Ilene:-) Autumn is in full show here - crunchy leaves on the ground and the hills are a patchwork of yellow and lilac with the heather and gorse - I took lots of pictures today I hope they turn out:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 4:27 PM
I wonder if the city heat keeps them green longer. Very nice Ilene
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