Autumn Breeze

Autumn brings cold darkness
Enveloping fog gathers
Hanging in joyless khaki
Leaves mound noiselessly
Offering people quiet rustles
Should the unsuspecting vegetation
Whirl xcitable-as-a young zephyr




Please excuse the minor indescretion on the last line :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 27, 2013 at 1:41 AM
Nick, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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March 1, 2012 at 7:03 AM
I like to read a good poem Nick, lovely. - oxox Anne-Lise
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February 29, 2012 at 10:26 AM
so creative with a charming feel to it, nick... grreaat job!..:) huggs!
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February 28, 2012 at 1:01 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry.
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February 28, 2012 at 9:18 AM
luv it Nick.. visuall.. i,aginative.. detailed i,agery.. fascinating.. and last line is umique .. good write ..luv..
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