Autumn Breeze

You are lost to the Autumn breeze,
I whisper to the barks~
please bring my sun back…
I yearn for your smile.
The one that fell  in the puddles of rain,
I wonder if the branches are in pain,
they are bare like my soul, 
waiting for summer to feel whole,
missing their rainbow leaves…
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December 15, 2024 at 4:20 AM
This is full of feeling! The yearning and longing of missing someone. I like the series of three verbs: I whisper, I yearn; I wonder. My fave image is the smile that fell in the puddles of rain. And I like these sound elements: barks/back; y -yearn /your; w and 'ow' -whisper, one, wonder, soul, wait, whole, rainbow. Sad and beautiful. J :)
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