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Autumn Breeze

You are lost to the Autumn breeze, I whisper to the barks~ please bring my sun back… I yearn for your smile. The one that fell in the puddles of rain, I wonder if the branches are in pain, they are bare like my soul, waiting for summer to feel whole, missing their rainbow leaves…

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Tom Woody

Date: 12/15/2024 5:45:00 AM

Pretty poem Sabrina. Congrats on your win!

Jeanette Swan

Date: 12/15/2024 4:20:00 AM

This is full of feeling! The yearning and longing of missing someone. I like the series of three verbs: I whisper, I yearn; I wonder. My fave image is the smile that fell in the puddles of rain. And I like these sound elements: barks/back; y -yearn /your; w and 'ow' -whisper, one, wonder, soul, wait, whole, rainbow. Sad and beautiful. J :)