Autumn Breeze

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coolest ecstasies
high noon sun was most cruel
vibrant leaves fall down

the breeze has found me
after searching all the world
among the late blooms

all the season's best
happened in a single day
birds sang in shadows

eternal drifter
underneath the turquoise skies
cool autumn surprise

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Alexis Y.

Date: 9/3/2021 9:50:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, You know how to paint a lovely picture with words very well. I liked the way you described an Autumn breeze. Well done;-) Alexis

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/1/2021 10:59:00 PM

Lovely poem. I like the idea of a breeze in search of leaves Hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/2/2021 9:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for your thoughts, Victor. Hugs.