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Autumn Awakes

*Image of Indiana History by Giphy.
Autumn Awakes Rustling ochre, crimson leaves all daylong, A coolness settles, shorter days advanced, Easterlies, westerlies, tradewinds strong, Southward birds fly, so parts summer birdsong, Mid leaves lay spiked beech, acorn--care enhanced, Rustling ochre, crimson leaves all daylong, Sweetness in brambles flourished berries throng, Black, elder, wild rasp--touched tastebuds danced, Easterlies, westerlies, tradewinds strong, Favored spots, here and there, all lists are long, 'Tis time hearts invent for landscape has entranced, Rustling ochre, crimson leaves all daylong, Deep verdant Ivy becomes, draped headlong, Few flowers blooms hugged flown insects instanced, Easterlies, westerlies, tradewinds strong, Harvested tabled, prayers blessed belong, Autumn picturesque, surroundings felt...glanced, Rustling ochre, crimson leaves all daylong, Easterlies, westerlies, tradewinds strong. 2020 August 21 *7th Place* Serenity Awakened ~~Regina McIntosh: Judged 2020 August 27 *1st Place* COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (20)any form any theme ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 August 03
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Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 1:22 PM
So awesome, William. BIG CONGRATS for a number one winner.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Thank you kindly, Andrea, btw, watching more TV now as my team, the Oakland A's are moving up in the charts and will play the Astro's tomorrow, Aloha! William
Mcgee Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 6:37 AM
You captured autumn in all it's splendid glory and your image enhances the mood and feelings expressed...well done, William! congrats on the win
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 9:16 AM
I am appreciative for your kind considerations, Jeanne, thank you, Aloha! William
Dutta Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 8:57 PM
Your poem and associated picture simultaneously touche excellence. Congrats to win TOP. Blessing
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 10:03 PM
Your wondrous words is most welcoming, Anisha, thank you, Aloha! William
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August 27, 2020 at 11:34 AM
William, you have taken the canvass of autumn and painted an amazing picture of fall images - the birdsong leaving, the brambles, colorful leaves. This is one of my favorites from your pen! Congratulations on your winning placement!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 7:43 PM
Wow Sam, slept at the wheels--thank you lots my friend, didn't know til my recent win, Aloha! William
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August 27, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Congrats dear friend and many blessings. Thank you for entering your lovely poem
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Thanks for the opportunity, Regina, and my placement, Aloha! William
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 3:21 PM
Beautifully written William. :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 3:24 PM
My thanks, sweet Heidi, stay well, Aloha! William
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