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Autumn Approaching

thirsty leaves turn pale scents of autumn in the air nights turning nippy
written August 25, 2021

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Date: 8/30/2021 6:58:00 PM
I am ready for these "nippy nights" aren't you Hank?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/30/2021 7:10:00 PM
Nope, I'll stick with springtime; they remind me winter is coming.
Date: 8/26/2021 3:03:00 AM
It will soon be here Milton, my favourite season without a doubt. Your haiku captured it well. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/26/2021 7:56:00 AM
Thank you, Tom, although I'm not a big proponent of the fall. I love spring!
Date: 8/25/2021 11:40:00 PM
I am so looking forward to winter...Delice
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Date: 8/26/2021 7:58:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughts. I wish I could be more pleased about the approach of winter. I'm a spring person.
Date: 8/25/2021 7:12:00 PM
Great Haiku, Milton. Indeed leaves are thirsty, but I'm afraid of cold winters like you.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/25/2021 7:52:00 PM
Thanks, Lasaad. I appreciate your read and your comment.
Date: 8/25/2021 2:35:00 PM
Looking forward to nippy! :)
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Date: 8/25/2021 3:29:00 PM
Ah, I don't prefer Autumn since it reminds me of cold winters. I love me springtime!

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