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Autumn Approaches, Haiku

Running in the grass, The kitten ran with joyful sass, Birds flew south, en masse! 8/27/2021 2 * Rhymed Haiku

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Date: 8/29/2021 5:32:00 PM
Approach! Approach! Sans all humidity! ~ Pouring Sweat
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/30/2021 8:31:00 AM
GERSHON...Chicago humidity is only one thing that moved me out of your city. II is quite unbearble for me. Hot here but drier. A problem for forests that are now heading for Lake Tahoe? Right , Noodnik governor lets CA BURN... let's the state burn??We have not seen rain for months. Turn on a fan. A fan of yours, Pangie
Date: 8/28/2021 10:23:00 AM
A wonderful write. Few words with much said. Birds flying south means winter is coming. Stay warm. Have a blessed day/weekend......................
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Date: 8/28/2021 2:16:00 PM
Hi Paula! I read a poem that still has me laughing, A belly laugh is great when it does not demean other humans....My thing is to write humor about only yourself...never other people.but I am quite direct when I see harm done to fellow humans, TY.for commenting and a good weekend to you. Pangie Anyway I, too liked the bird imagery.));)
Date: 8/28/2021 9:02:00 AM
Seeing the V formations is a sure sign autumn is fast approaching. Tom
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Date: 8/28/2021 2:07:00 PM
Tom, wish I were a bird and could fly with them.. How great that would be, Pangie
Date: 8/28/2021 6:50:00 AM
Soon enough we will see the V's arrowing their way to warmer climes as we await the ice fairies.
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Date: 8/28/2021 7:53:00 AM
Sweet reply, John. Love the ice fairy concept.... Delightghtful.. With joy, Pangie
Date: 8/28/2021 2:07:00 AM
Picturesque, Pangie:)
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Date: 8/28/2021 6:43:00 AM
Grateful you are on this site, Pangie xx

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