Autumn Approaches, Haiku

Running in the grass,
               The kitten ran with joyful sass,
               Birds flew south, en masse!


 
                          8/27/2021
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               * Rhymed Haiku
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Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 5:32 PM
Approach! Approach! Sans all humidity! ~ Pouring Sweat
Romios Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 8:31 AM
GERSHON...Chicago humidity is only one thing that moved me out of your city. II is quite unbearble for me. Hot here but drier. A problem for forests that are now heading for Lake Tahoe? Right , Noodnik governor lets CA BURN... let's the state burn??We have not seen rain for months. Turn on a fan. A fan of yours, Pangie
Goldsmith Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:23 AM
A wonderful write. Few words with much said. Birds flying south means winter is coming. Stay warm. Have a blessed day/weekend......................
Romios Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Hi Paula! I read a poem that still has me laughing, A belly laugh is great when it does not demean other humans....My thing is to write humor about only yourself...never other people.but I am quite direct when I see harm done to fellow humans, TY.for commenting and a good weekend to you. Pangie Anyway I, too liked the bird imagery.));)
Cunningham Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Seeing the V formations is a sure sign autumn is fast approaching. Tom
Romios Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Tom, wish I were a bird and could fly with them.. How great that would be, Pangie
Lawless Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Soon enough we will see the V's arrowing their way to warmer climes as we await the ice fairies.
Romios Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Sweet reply, John. Love the ice fairy concept.... Delightghtful.. With joy, Pangie
Daniel Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 2:07 AM
Picturesque, Pangie:)
Romios Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:43 AM
Grateful you are on this site, Pangie xx
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