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Autumn Afternoon

Turning sun's touch realign and tilt Languid brooks scarce compete with hardy The breeze of ease reposing and tardy As debutants of summer seem to wilt 4/24/19 originally in 'Turning Sun's Touch' on this website For Rithimus Divisa contest Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2019 2:50:00 PM

If Greg likes this as much as I do, you've got a nice prize coming your way! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/28/2019 2:58:00 PM

I am hoping so, he has high standards!

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/26/2019 8:19:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this beautiful poem :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/28/2019 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/25/2019 3:11:00 PM

I am amazed when poets can readily find a poem they had already written; I never can. Good luck in Greg's unique contest, Michelle. This one was beautiful both times around.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/25/2019 10:34:00 PM

What a sweet compliment, thank you, Caren!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/24/2019 7:06:00 PM

Wilting is a natural result of suddenly realising, "Damn! Its cold outside!" and there is no warmth to be seen on one's horizon! Happy to see you are back! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/24/2019 10:35:00 PM

Aw, thanks for the kind words, Rico!