Michelle Faulkner Poet Rhyme

Autumn Afternoon

Turning sun's touch realign and tilt
Languid brooks scarce compete with hardy
The breeze of ease reposing and tardy
As debutants of summer seem to wilt

4/24/19

originally in 'Turning Sun's Touch' on this website

For Rithimus Divisa contest
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

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Gershon Wolf April 28, 2019 at 2:50 PM If Greg likes this as much as I do, you've got a nice prize coming your way! :) gw Michelle Faulkner April 28, 2019 at 2:58 PM I am hoping so, he has high standards!

Heidi Sands April 26, 2019 at 8:19 AM Good luck in the contest with this beautiful poem :) Michelle Faulkner April 28, 2019 at 2:59 PM Thank you, Heidi!

Caren Krutsinger April 25, 2019 at 3:11 PM I am amazed when poets can readily find a poem they had already written; I never can. Good luck in Greg's unique contest, Michelle. This one was beautiful both times around. Michelle Faulkner April 25, 2019 at 10:34 PM What a sweet compliment, thank you, Caren!

Rico Leffanta April 24, 2019 at 7:06 PM Wilting is a natural result of suddenly realising, "Damn! Its cold outside!" and there is no warmth to be seen on one's horizon! Happy to see you are back! Aloha! Rico Michelle Faulkner April 24, 2019 at 10:35 PM Aw, thanks for the kind words, Rico!