Autumn

Autumn breathing close Welcome Nature's alchemy Cheek to frosty cheek

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/28/2017 11:28:00 AM

Today it is here outside the window making freezy faces at me. I am revisiting this poem because...... no other reason than I like it very much.

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/10/2017 9:15:00 AM

You know Peter on this site we could encompass the world. Shivers of excitement.

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/10/2017 1:57:00 AM

cheek to frosty cheek breath entwined white crystalline wreath-wraith floats midair Challenge response poem (haiku) using last line as first in response.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/10/2017 9:10:00 AM

Chiselled stones in mist/ bring forth the heath in spirits/shaggy ponies watch If some one wishes to join they just say excuse me and jump in trying to maintain the thought flow.

Peter Rees
Date: 9/10/2017 8:13:00 AM

Wreath-wraith floats midair, Passing by, as you and I, Chiselled stones in mist.

Peter Rees
Date: 9/10/2017 5:07:00 AM

Lovely response Patricia. I hadn't been aware of such a thing as a challenge response poem. Nice idea, which you have demonstrated beautifully. Still preparing for exhibition, which isn't until October.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/10/2017 1:59:00 AM

You can't post poem in comment site. Is it clear enough. How is you show going?

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2017 8:20:00 PM

A very beautiful haiku Peter. I enjoyed the imagery immensely :)

Peter Rees
Date: 9/10/2017 5:03:00 AM

Thank you so much for this kind comment Susan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 2:41:00 PM

- A chilly autumn hugs, well done Peter - (Autumn has arrived in Norway) - // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Rees
Date: 9/9/2017 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.We won't be far behind in the UK, and then the snow will come, but you know all about snow !! Best wishes.