Autumn

Autumn breathing close
Welcome Nature's alchemy
Cheek to frosty cheek

autumnhaiku

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Patricia Cresswell

September 28, 2017 at 11:28 AM

Today it is here outside the window making freezy faces at me. I am revisiting this poem because...... no other reason than I like it very much.

Patricia Cresswell

September 10, 2017 at 9:15 AM

You know Peter on this site we could encompass the world. Shivers of excitement.

Patricia Cresswell

September 10, 2017 at 1:57 AM

cheek to frosty cheek breath entwined white crystalline wreath-wraith floats midair Challenge response poem (haiku) using last line as first in response.

Patricia Cresswell

September 10, 2017 at 9:10 AM

Chiselled stones in mist/ bring forth the heath in spirits/shaggy ponies watch If some one wishes to join they just say excuse me and jump in trying to maintain the thought flow.

Peter Rees

September 10, 2017 at 8:13 AM

Wreath-wraith floats midair, Passing by, as you and I, Chiselled stones in mist.

Peter Rees

September 10, 2017 at 5:07 AM

Lovely response Patricia. I hadn't been aware of such a thing as a challenge response poem. Nice idea, which you have demonstrated beautifully. Still preparing for exhibition, which isn't until October.

Patricia Cresswell

September 10, 2017 at 1:59 AM

You can't post poem in comment site. Is it clear enough. How is you show going?