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Autumn

Autumn breathing close
Welcome Nature's alchemy
Cheek to frosty cheek

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Date: 9/28/2017 11:28:00 AM
Today it is here outside the window making freezy faces at me. I am revisiting this poem because...... no other reason than I like it very much.
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Date: 9/10/2017 9:15:00 AM
You know Peter on this site we could encompass the world. Shivers of excitement.
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Date: 9/10/2017 1:57:00 AM
cheek to frosty cheek breath entwined white crystalline wreath-wraith floats midair Challenge response poem (haiku) using last line as first in response.
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PATRICIA CRESSWELL
Date: 9/10/2017 9:10:00 AM
Chiselled stones in mist/ bring forth the heath in spirits/shaggy ponies watch If some one wishes to join they just say excuse me and jump in trying to maintain the thought flow.
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Peter Rees
Date: 9/10/2017 8:13:00 AM
Wreath-wraith floats midair, Passing by, as you and I, Chiselled stones in mist.
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Peter Rees
Date: 9/10/2017 5:07:00 AM
Lovely response Patricia. I hadn't been aware of such a thing as a challenge response poem. Nice idea, which you have demonstrated beautifully. Still preparing for exhibition, which isn't until October.
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PATRICIA CRESSWELL
Date: 9/10/2017 1:59:00 AM
You can't post poem in comment site. Is it clear enough. How is you show going?
Date: 9/9/2017 8:20:00 PM
A very beautiful haiku Peter. I enjoyed the imagery immensely :)
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Peter Rees
Date: 9/10/2017 5:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for this kind comment Susan.
Date: 9/9/2017 2:41:00 PM
- A chilly autumn hugs, well done Peter - (Autumn has arrived in Norway) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Rees
Date: 9/9/2017 3:15:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.We won't be far behind in the UK, and then the snow will come, but you know all about snow !! Best wishes.