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Autumn

Fall 
will start
It is near
Is in the air
Now

Say 
Good-bye
To summer
Hot weather is 
Gone

Air 
Crispy
Starts to cool
No more burning 
Sun

Birds
Migrate
Butterfly
Will return next
Year

Trees
Change garb
Leaves transform
From golden to
Brown

Day 
To thank
God for all
Thanksgiving Day
Is

Good
Food on table
Family
Gods blessings for
All

Pies
Turkey
Cranberry sauce
Apple cider
Sweet

Fall
Season
Of wonder
Enjoy rich change
Smile

Praise
Thank God
Fall is great
Serenity
Brings

Mild
Weather
Azure sky
Togetherness
Nice

Fall
Brings calm
And repose
After summers 
Storms.


Dorian Petersen Potter
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10.11.14

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Len Gasun Date: 10/13/2014 1:19:00 AM This is amazing write! Beautiful imagery and form, too. And I like the flow of your poem. I will fave this and you if you don't mind my dear poet and friend Dorian. By the way, I love your sonnetina rispetto, a very nice form you've introduced. I am so interested to make a try on this form soon. Thank you so much! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/12/2014 11:26:00 PM How lovely all in lanterne form it appears! Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/13/2014 4:32:00 PM Thank you so much Andrea! ;) love and light! xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/12/2014 5:09:00 PM what a very beautifully drawn picture excellent pen Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/12/2014 6:33:00 PM Thank you Liam! :) love peace and light! xxxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/12/2014 1:00:00 PM - Yes, it is sad to say goodbye to summer - but autumn is beautiful as well - thanks for the beautiful poem, Dorian! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/12/2014 6:31:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise! ;) oxox Love peace and light! xxxx D.

Bl Devnath Date: 10/11/2014 12:58:00 PM Very sweet change in fall that brings happiness to all. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/12/2014 12:59:00 PM Yes, fall is that and much more BL my sweet friend! ;) thank you for all your kindness and lovely friendhip ;) Hugs! Love and light! xxx D.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/11/2014 11:57:00 AM I can see the beauty through the lanterne's light, Dorian Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/12/2014 12:57:00 PM Thank you for dropping by snd your kind words, Dr.Ram! Have a great day!;) Love peace and light! xxx D.