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Autumn

Nature's dreams of silenced memories are caught in fading sunlit days. And autumn leaves of richest colours are joyful dancing in the evening breeze, still loaden with sun's golden rays. Let winter come, oh nature be prepared to fall in peaceful dreams, let children play in winter's whitest fun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/7/2009 4:28:00 AM
This one is so peaceful feeling. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:43:00 PM
What a lovely view autumn brings in your poem. Snow for children's play. Beautiful and fun! Very nice to read and envision. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:26:00 PM
It's half rhyme gert or slant rhyme & I'd divide it into 2 four lines groups and pump up the slyabble count a bit line 6. Too good a work not to give it a wee bit more attention! Light & Love
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Gert. I look forward to reading more of it. Good to see you taking a break from packing and writing a few verses. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love Carol
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Date: 10/24/2009 3:42:00 AM
Hi my friend, Love the wonderful visual here! Every line is captivating, smile. Thanks for sharing. Have a inspiring weekend Gert. Take care. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/23/2009 10:34:00 PM
Nice work Gert, Loved the opening lines...Raul
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