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12.56 Sept 22, 2024

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sun rays smack all trees leaving burning bright colors leaves fall in teardrops green grasses cuddle crowning each leaf as flowers season’s umbrella raw sienna branch striptease in every wind-dance wants winter’s attire

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:42:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2024 12:19:00 AM

Autumn Haiku - set of three Contest Judged: 10/8/2024 12:17:00 PM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 2 (up to 4th multi-w)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 10:55:00 PM

Your set is cute and clever. Big congrats

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2024 12:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Andrea. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

JCB Brul

Date: 10/9/2024 5:09:00 AM

Congratulations Len..I love the "leaves fall in teardrops". "Green grasses cuddle" and "striptease in every wind-dance". You've created an unforgettable magical scene here! Lovely!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/10/2024 12:22:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest poet friend Jcb for reading my poem, your uplifting words and congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:07:00 PM

Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/9/2024 11:13:00 PM

Thank you so much my dearest poet friend Tania for aknowleding my poem in your contest. Your approval on my poem though my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/8/2024 12:37:00 PM

thoroughly enjoyed your volta for all three sets of ku, len...congrats on your splendid win!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/9/2024 9:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for coming back to enjoy this poem of mine my dearest poet friend and sis and thanks for the warm congratulatory greetings too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/25/2024 10:42:00 AM

Dearest Len, what a wonderful entry for the contest! I love each of your last lines - so vibrant and so uniquely creative! "Leaves fall in teardrops," "season's umbrella!" Sending you best wishes for a win and blessings dear poet friend.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/26/2024 8:00:00 PM

Dearest poet friend Sam, thank you so much for your lovely visit, your uplifting comments on my poem and loving wishes. My loving wishes back to you my dear. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Triny Xiang

Date: 9/23/2024 2:07:00 PM

So seasonally grand Your winter's attire stripped bare Shows the spring in you Bravo!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/26/2024 7:11:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comment my dear poet Triny. God bless. Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/21/2024 1:02:00 PM

Ahh Dear Len, first of all I love Autumn and your beautiful haiku punctuates it for me in many ways. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Len Gasun
Date: 9/22/2024 7:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my haiku my dear poet friend Daniel. Thanks for your uplifting comment to. Blessings to you as well and your writings. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2024 11:50:00 AM

my, delightful triplets, each 'ku penned with powerful volta... I like them all, len...superbly scribed capturing the very essence of autumn!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/22/2024 6:27:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem and your uplifting/encouraging words my dearest poet friend Nette. Thanks for liking it too. God bless you always and your writings. Have a wonderful new week ahead. Hugs