Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

autumn

leaves get aging spots
falling seeds, shifting of birds ~
harbingers of fall


trees go bald and stripped
resemble antlers of bucks~
sacks full of produce


days go diminished
lapse rate of warmth increases~
groundwork for winter

PLACE : 3rd

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Sara Kendrick October 22, 2024 at 6:34 AM I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2024 at 11:06 PM Congrats on your win, Patri. Patri Venkata Ramana October 10, 2024 at 4:44 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Tania Kitchin October 8, 2024 at 1:20 PM Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set. Patri Venkata Ramana October 9, 2024 at 2:12 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Hilda Greenhough September 20, 2024 at 3:13 PM These great haiku lead me down a road of increasing autumn scenes. Poetry glows with warmth of the season. Patri Venkata Ramana September 21, 2024 at 9:21 AM Thank you so much for your compliments. Thrilled to read your words.