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leaves get aging spots falling seeds, shifting of birds ~ harbingers of fall trees go bald and stripped resemble antlers of bucks~ sacks full of produce days go diminished lapse rate of warmth increases~ groundwork for winter PLACE : 3rd

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Date: 10/22/2024 6:34:00 AM
I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 10/9/2024 11:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Patri.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/10/2024 4:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 10/8/2024 1:20:00 PM
Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/9/2024 2:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 9/20/2024 3:13:00 PM
These great haiku lead me down a road of increasing autumn scenes. Poetry glows with warmth of the season.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/21/2024 9:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for your compliments. Thrilled to read your words.

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