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autumn

a brushless artist teases a waiting canvas a-shift on the wind as hoar frost passes a shrinking of violets petals on pavement soft melting sunset beauty imbued in the trees Autumn’s au revoir

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Date: 9/23/2024 8:35:00 PM
I like "a brushless artist teases a waiting canvas"
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Date: 9/23/2024 4:39:00 PM
Beautiful images of Fall, John, Makes me want to paint The beauty of your last line lingers. We are always certain to meet Autumn again. Thanks for my placement in tour Autumn contest. SuZ
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Date: 9/18/2024 8:52:00 PM
I enjoy this splendid haiku. It is happening now with approaching cold weather.
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Date: 9/18/2024 8:06:00 PM
O, that au revoir! Awesome, John!
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Date: 9/18/2024 2:22:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write. Yes, autumn will be coming very soon with all the pretty colors/cooler weather. I love this time of the year.... Have a blessed day writing away.................
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