autumn

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autumnal colors close neighboring planet skies equinox sunsets red hue leaves tussle woodchuck pops from its burrow dog sniff, yelps in pain quiver across limbs perching mockingbird's mimic nightly shooting stars 9/18/2024

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:31:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Back with congratulations. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 11:11:00 PM

The woodchuck line is so cute. Congrats on the contest

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:28:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku set.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2024 4:10:00 AM

Ahhh!! Definitely fall happenings. I enjoyed reading these. Thanks for sharing the information that it contains. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/23/2024 5:42:00 AM

Excellent take on astronomy haikus. You did very well and quite original. Hugs.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/20/2024 3:03:00 PM

I think I will come and live where you do! A very cool image as well. Love your Haikus. Pangie

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/20/2024 2:43:00 AM

Three beautiful Haikus, dear Eve. Should do well in the contest. Best of luck. Hugs.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/19/2024 8:30:00 AM

Dear Eve, I love the evening and the night skies, especially in Autumn. Your Haikus make it more romantic for me. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/18/2024 2:07:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful "Autumn" Haiku write with a great sky picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................