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autumn

autumnal colors
close neighboring planet skies
equinox sunsets

red hue leaves tussle
woodchuck pops from its burrow
dog sniff, yelps in pain

quiver across limbs
perching mockingbird's mimic
nightly shooting stars

9/18/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 6:31 AM
I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Back with congratulations. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 11:11 PM
The woodchuck line is so cute. Congrats on the contest
Kitchin Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku set.
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 4:10 AM
Ahhh!! Definitely fall happenings. I enjoyed reading these. Thanks for sharing the information that it contains. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 5:42 AM
Excellent take on astronomy haikus. You did very well and quite original. Hugs.
Romios Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 3:03 PM
I think I will come and live where you do! A very cool image as well. Love your Haikus. Pangie
Buhagiar Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 2:43 AM
Three beautiful Haikus, dear Eve. Should do well in the contest. Best of luck. Hugs.
Rodgers Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Dear Eve, I love the evening and the night skies, especially in Autumn. Your Haikus make it more romantic for me. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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September 18, 2024 at 2:07 PM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful "Autumn" Haiku write with a great sky picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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