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Eight Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

synthetic, emanate, swirling, rustic,  timeless, illusion, blossom, silence

Autumn

The nascent sun warmth appears to emanate
The spiritual worlds charm of confidence state.
A breath whisper thrives a frail blossom;
Reclaim its exhalation colour delight-some.

A small, huff, whirlwind uplifts, swirling,
Pinwheel of fallen autumn leaves, ebbing,
Passionate rant ease, then lay unhook
Settling a pepper to a rustic idyllic look.

Existent amorous illusion scene of welcoming aweless
Sheath dress in continuance timeless solace.
Spellbound by silence sweet embracing scent
Eminently natural or synthetic trace descent.

Sunny laughter where squirrel scurry everywhere. 
Charm and seductive song of mockingbird compare. 
In an aura and its heavenly quintessence kept abreast; 
Butterflies flit, bumblebees Emerging from nestled rest.


7/21/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Gasun Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 7:16 PM
Awesome poem and imagery of autumn my dear poet friend Eve. I love how you've perfectly used the given words in the challenge. My warm congratulations on your win!
May Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 5:04 AM
Congrats on your win Eve, Very nicely penned
mysore Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:22 PM
beautiful. congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading about your wonderful "Autumn" write again. I can't for "Autumn" time.  Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 7:41 AM
I am delighted in: Reclaim its exhalation colour delight-some. Wording unexpected and makes me smile, dear Eve! Love the description of the pinwheel, aweless, Spellbound by silence sweet embracing scent, bumblebees Emerging from nestled rest. Well done!
M  Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 11:16 AM
A lovely descriptive Autumn write Eve! Imagery beautiful….Debx
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 2:17 PM
Nicely done with some lovely images, Rve
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Good use of the words given. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 11:19 AM
Dear Eve, You caught my attention on the title because it is my favorite time of year. You have taken those required words and made something very beautiful. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Buhagiar Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 1:42 AM
I always admire your poetry. Great alliterations, metaphors and imagery. You did well with those chosen words. Best for a win. Hugs.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 5:23 PM
So nice write!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 11:07 AM
I enjoyed reading about your wonderful "Autumn" write. It will be here before we know it. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.....................
Empress Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 1:31 AM
What a profound poem dear eve, great use of the word prompts in this poem, i love the way youv painted imagery and your rhymes are brilliant.i love the subtle alliterations flowing too seamlessly. I think this will do well in the contest .. best wishes
Roper Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 9:03 AM
Thank you so much your words are very meaningful to me. Hugs my dear
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 12:29 AM
Well done! Love the rhyme and imagery Eve!
Roper Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Thank you, Karen, so much for your kind words and your visit. Hugs my dear
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