Autumn

Autumn leaves fall slow.
A Beautiful, colorful vision.
The sweet smell of fall.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2010 4:48:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Candice. I can picture all the goldens and browns. As the leaves of yesterday fall to the ground >> James

Date: 7/18/2009 5:45:00 PM

Nice scene! Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/18/2009 2:59:00 AM

excelent Haiku--cong.--charma

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/17/2009 4:36:00 PM

great haiku, congrats on being featured

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/14/2009 1:12:00 PM

Candice, congrats on your feature...Raul

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/13/2009 7:05:00 PM

sweet feature! Candice! beautiful images in a precise form! jim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2009 4:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Candice. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/13/2009 1:28:00 PM

Beautiful poem in a a Haiku form. Congratulations on your featured poetry. More power and success. Ernilando

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2009 11:57:00 AM

I love your expressiveness in this Haiku which is hard to achieve in so few words. Sara

Bishnu Bhusal

Date: 7/12/2009 11:18:00 PM

its full of emotions.a conjunction of beauty and loss.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/12/2009 10:57:00 PM

beautiful haiku loved this and congratulations on being featured this week .. Jayne x

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/12/2009 7:02:00 PM

Wow Candice! You've got a nice nature haiku, Great flow of words, this is a very creative piece. Congrats on your awesome poet being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke

James Knox

Date: 7/12/2009 4:04:00 PM

autumn is my favorite season , thanks for the sweet visual :)

Frances King

Date: 7/12/2009 3:59:00 PM

A beautiful calm Haiku, Candice. I'm glad to see you have some sweet memories.