Autumn

Autumn leaves fall slow.
A Beautiful, colorful vision.
The sweet smell of fall.

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James Fraser

May 16, 2010 at 4:48 PM

Wonderful Haiku Candice. I can picture all the goldens and browns. As the leaves of yesterday fall to the ground >> James

July 18, 2009 at 5:45 PM

Nice scene! Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Charmaine Chircop

July 18, 2009 at 2:59 AM

excelent Haiku--cong.--charma

Nicole Sharon Brown

July 17, 2009 at 4:36 PM

great haiku, congrats on being featured

Raul Moreno

July 14, 2009 at 1:12 PM

Candice, congrats on your feature...Raul

James Marshall Goff

July 13, 2009 at 7:05 PM

sweet feature! Candice! beautiful images in a precise form! jim

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 13, 2009 at 4:08 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Candice. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

July 13, 2009 at 1:28 PM

Beautiful poem in a a Haiku form. Congratulations on your featured poetry. More power and success. Ernilando

Sara Kendrick

July 13, 2009 at 11:57 AM

I love your expressiveness in this Haiku which is hard to achieve in so few words. Sara

Bishnu Bhusal

July 12, 2009 at 11:18 PM

its full of emotions.a conjunction of beauty and loss.

Jayne Eggins

July 12, 2009 at 10:57 PM

beautiful haiku loved this and congratulations on being featured this week .. Jayne x

Adeleke Adeite

July 12, 2009 at 7:02 PM

Wow Candice! You've got a nice nature haiku, Great flow of words, this is a very creative piece. Congrats on your awesome poet being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke