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Autumn

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10/30/23

 

 

Leaves of orange, brown,ochre and gold twirl and swirl in autumnal breeze This golden gown drifts to the forest floor. Tree shivers as limbs exposed yet her vibrant shawl blankets the ground until it's composted to earth

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Judith Kerttula
Date: 11/1/2023 6:29:00 AM
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What a beautiful picture of Autumn. Your poem fits the picture so well. I am a New England girl and I am so lucky to have seen so many scenes like this in my life. Thanks for sharing the picture and your poem.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 10/31/2023 3:33:00 AM
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What a beautiful autumn write dear Jan. Love it - and the gorgeous picture pairs so well with it. Such delightful, vivid imagery to celebrate your favourite time of year. ‘ This golden gown drifts to the forest floor’, ‘ vibrant shawl blankets the ground’. Gorgeous, poetic lines. One of your best yet! Happy Halloween my lovely over there in The Isle Of Man- I’ve always wanted to visit the islands. Hugs and smiles :):)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/31/2023 3:24:00 AM
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Splendid lyrical poem, Jan. Hope all is well/ Blessings.
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/30/2023 3:52:00 PM
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Remember, when you visit the supermarket, Jan… Humus and hummus are quite different mouthfuls. Smashing autumnal write.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/30/2023 12:38:00 PM
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this is very lovely, jan, and the picture with the falling leaves is a perfect accompaniment...
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2023 1:42:00 PM
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thanks Ilene its my favourite time of year:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arlo Parker
Date: 10/30/2023 10:38:00 AM
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Autumn transition portrayed well, JA. Brrr. :o)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2023 1:42:00 PM
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thanks AP xx

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