Autumn

dawn lays its head sleeping as  moonlight prevails over copper glory

autumn arrives - sapphire clouds eyes mist as water puddles flood their feet

storms shrills echo walls gliding leaves crispy amber pain upon grey mind 

the ballerina breeze dancing with golden moths in fierce pirouette

weary birds survey violet air wrath - blowing  bare innocent trees

bronze weeds wave gleefully from verdant fields - rich flowers slump olive soil

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Date: 11/8/2023 11:26:00 AM
Back with congratulations! Well deserved win!
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Date: 10/28/2023 9:48:00 PM
Dear Sabrina, I absolutely love this monoku poem written with such vivid and artistic imagery. So many brilliant lines but my favorite is the ballerina one and violet air monoku! How creative and beautiful is this! Definitely can see through your words shifting shades of autumn and bronze weeds waving! This definitely would be a top winner, if its for the contest! Goodluck. Sending you light today and always.
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Sabrina Millicent
Date: 10/29/2023 11:24:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I appreciate your wonderful feedback it's greatly appreciated.
Date: 10/28/2023 12:39:00 PM
A lovely Autumn poem. Well done.
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Sabrina Millicent
Date: 10/28/2023 1:11:00 PM
Thank you for your support it means alot to me.
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