Akanksha Ayantika Poet Other

Autumn

Creaking under my feet, the jigsaw laid of nature's splendorous feat.

a crude summer gone;
docile sun's affable rays
sprinkling us with gold

Rustle of leaves, autumn ring
The wind fiddles a violin string 
Welcoming the harvest sweet 
Call for the first snow-meet. 


8th June 2023

For the contest: A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme - Same Theme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2023 at 2:15 AM - Congratulations on your lovely poem - in the contest by Tania Kitchin - Akanksha Ayantika June 13, 2023 at 2:38 AM Many many thanks!

Brian Sambourne June 12, 2023 at 3:48 PM Exceptional combination of poetic forms. A tip of the hat in congratulations. Sincerest regards, Brian Akanksha Ayantika June 13, 2023 at 2:40 AM Thank you, Brian, for your kind words in appreciation of my poems.

Tania Kitchin June 12, 2023 at 3:24 PM Akanksha, congratulations on your first place win, a beautiful set of poems. Akanksha Ayantika June 13, 2023 at 2:43 AM Thank you so much Tania for my placement! :) And for organising the contest with such a beautiful idea of compiling different forms together.