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Autumn

Creaking under my feet, the jigsaw laid of nature's splendorous feat. a crude summer gone; docile sun's affable rays sprinkling us with gold Rustle of leaves, autumn ring The wind fiddles a violin string Welcoming the harvest sweet Call for the first snow-meet.
8th June 2023 For the contest: A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme - Same Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 6/13/2023 2:15:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem - in the contest by Tania Kitchin -
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 6/13/2023 2:38:00 AM
Many many thanks!
Date: 6/12/2023 3:48:00 PM
Exceptional combination of poetic forms. A tip of the hat in congratulations. Sincerest regards, Brian
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 6/13/2023 2:40:00 AM
Thank you, Brian, for your kind words in appreciation of my poems.
Date: 6/12/2023 3:24:00 PM
Akanksha, congratulations on your first place win, a beautiful set of poems.
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 6/13/2023 2:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania for my placement! :) And for organising the contest with such a beautiful idea of compiling different forms together.

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