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Autumn

leaves flutter like butterflies, dawdle graceful path zigzag down, down, down beneath trees shade long deep sighs. Settle and snag among collaborating blades. mutinous breeze tendrils rise drag and sweep away the dry leaves like wings fly and touch the sky. 7/18/2021

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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/23/2021 2:55:00 AM
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Without doubt my favourite season Eve, you captured it well in your verse. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2021 4:14:00 PM
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amazing imagery. This is so creative, Eve.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2021 4:14:00 PM
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oh and POTD I see. Wow, Congrats
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Ann Foster
Date: 7/22/2021 8:29:00 AM
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I love butterflies, and you have captured this moment well... excellent write. Ann
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David Mchattie
Date: 7/21/2021 4:46:00 PM
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Congrats on POTD. Well penned indeed. I look forward to the cool air of fall. Have a great day.
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Paris-Maree Boreham
Date: 7/21/2021 6:46:00 AM
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delicate graceful and beautifully written, i visualised when reading, just lovely ! Thanks for sharing and Congratulations on your well deserved win !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/21/2021 5:43:00 AM
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like wings fly and touch the sky. Superb! Congratulations!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/20/2021 10:53:00 AM
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Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments.
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Marion Price
Date: 7/20/2021 8:40:00 AM
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Lovely lazy write...enjoyed the read x
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/20/2021 7:52:00 AM
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Hello Eve, I'm already looking forward to Autumn like yours. -Richard
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/19/2021 5:48:00 AM
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Awesome ode to autumn, Eve, in splendid images.
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/19/2021 5:05:00 AM
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Such a delightful poem, Eve! The breathless dance of dry leaves is amplified by the apt verbs which you used. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 7/19/2021 2:51:00 AM
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Wonderful words. I enjoyed this so much. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/18/2021 10:48:00 PM
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Your poem is craftily made using all sorts of movement to achieve a beautiful autumn day. Hugs.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 7/18/2021 9:35:00 PM
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Lovely, first line and last superb!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2021 10:33:00 PM
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Rama, thank you so very much for the inspiring encouragement. Hugs Eve
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/18/2021 8:25:00 PM
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Movement, color, sight and sound-all are a part of this magical verse. :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2021 10:34:00 PM
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Evelyn, thank your meaningful words they mean a lot to me. Hugs Eve
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/18/2021 6:15:00 PM
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This is just the perfect picture of autumn's grace and imminent parting painted therein. :) gw
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2021 10:36:00 PM
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Thank you so very much, Gershon, for you wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/18/2021 6:14:00 PM
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Lovely Eve, the poem reads like a dance of autumn leaves… Belle
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2021 10:37:00 PM
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Thank you, Belle, for your encouragement . Hugs Eve
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/18/2021 6:04:00 PM
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Lovely Eve. God Bless, JB
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2021 6:08:00 PM
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Thank you, Judy. God Bless you too.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2021 5:10:00 PM
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absolutely delightful Eve i love that opening line:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/18/2021 6:09:00 PM
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Thank you , Jan.. Bless you. Hugs Eve

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