Eve Roper Poet Verse

Autumn

leaves flutter like butterflies, 
dawdle graceful path zigzag 
down, down, down beneath trees shade 
long deep sighs. Settle and snag 
among collaborating blades. 
mutinous breeze tendrils rise drag 
and sweep away the dry leaves 
like wings fly and touch the sky.


7/18/2021

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tom Cunningham July 23, 2021 at 2:55 AM Without doubt my favourite season Eve, you captured it well in your verse. Tom

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2021 at 4:14 PM oh and POTD I see. Wow, Congrats

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2021 at 4:14 PM amazing imagery. This is so creative, Eve.

Ann Foster July 22, 2021 at 8:29 AM I love butterflies, and you have captured this moment well... excellent write. Ann

David Mchattie July 21, 2021 at 4:46 PM Congrats on POTD. Well penned indeed. I look forward to the cool air of fall. Have a great day.

Paris-Maree Boreham July 21, 2021 at 6:46 AM delicate graceful and beautifully written, i visualised when reading, just lovely ! Thanks for sharing and Congratulations on your well deserved win !

Christuraj Alex July 21, 2021 at 5:43 AM like wings fly and touch the sky. Superb! Congratulations!

Rama Balasubramanian July 20, 2021 at 10:53 AM Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments.

Marion Price July 20, 2021 at 8:40 AM Lovely lazy write...enjoyed the read x

Quoth Theraven July 20, 2021 at 7:52 AM Hello Eve, I'm already looking forward to Autumn like yours. -Richard

Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 5:48 AM Awesome ode to autumn, Eve, in splendid images.

Paul Callus July 19, 2021 at 5:05 AM Such a delightful poem, Eve! The breathless dance of dry leaves is amplified by the apt verbs which you used. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Regina Mcintosh July 19, 2021 at 2:51 AM Wonderful words. I enjoyed this so much. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar July 18, 2021 at 10:48 PM Your poem is craftily made using all sorts of movement to achieve a beautiful autumn day. Hugs.

Rama Balasubramanian July 18, 2021 at 9:35 PM Lovely, first line and last superb! Eve Roper July 18, 2021 at 10:33 PM Rama, thank you so very much for the inspiring encouragement. Hugs Eve

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 18, 2021 at 8:25 PM Movement, color, sight and sound-all are a part of this magical verse. :) Eve Roper July 18, 2021 at 10:34 PM Evelyn, thank your meaningful words they mean a lot to me. Hugs Eve

Gershon Wolf July 18, 2021 at 6:15 PM This is just the perfect picture of autumn's grace and imminent parting painted therein. :) gw Eve Roper July 18, 2021 at 10:36 PM Thank you so very much, Gershon, for you wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve

Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2021 at 6:14 PM Lovely Eve, the poem reads like a dance of autumn leaves… Belle Eve Roper July 18, 2021 at 10:37 PM Thank you, Belle, for your encouragement . Hugs Eve

Judy Ball July 18, 2021 at 6:04 PM Lovely Eve. God Bless, JB Eve Roper July 18, 2021 at 6:08 PM Thank you, Judy. God Bless you too.

Jan Allison July 18, 2021 at 5:10 PM absolutely delightful Eve i love that opening line:-) hugs jan xx Eve Roper July 18, 2021 at 6:09 PM Thank you , Jan.. Bless you. Hugs Eve